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    MOAR CRITS!

    hey guys, i've loitered around CA for awhile, but haven't really posted due to lack of time (excuse i know )

    so yep, gonna start this thread as a source of critique and motivation from you ppl


    and some random sketch i did, just trying to play around with the colors and keep the sketchy-ness to a minimum

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    new stuff always at the last page!

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    short intro of myself, yan from Singapore.
    Likes to spend time doodling on random stuff.

    Came back to update this sketchbook, since i felt like i hit a roadblock for improvement.

    heady study;

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    test test with smaller pic

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    sketches.............

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    a quick colour study i did today!

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    quick crit?

    anyone?

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    bunch of sketches,
    need a goal to accomplish, so i wont feel so er, static

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    some random studies, looks like i'm stuck with colours, any ideas on how to progress?

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    Hey Yan, stuff is looking good. I like it. As far as crits and comments. I would say to maybe just take a little more time when you're drawing. Think about the lines a little bit before you place them, make sure they have a purpose. Besides that, keep up with the life and photo studies. You're on the right track!

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    @jNeumann, thanks man, trying my best to focus on these studies

    played with colours more again today
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    bump up for random stuff!

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    bump for colour study!

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    I think you are doing a fine job with these, but you can push them much further and improve faster if you really slow down and try to get as detailed as possible. I learned this from taking lessons with Jason Seiler... It's better to see if you can get one piece to look really realistic ( maybe photorealistic ) than to do a bunch of studies that aren't to that level.

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    @Sycra, took your advice and slowed down my painting process(okay maybe not that slow).
    Here's the end result though
    crit away!

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    bump!
    just 2 of the studies i did over the past 2weeks
    photoshop sketch i'm work up slowly!

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    bumo!

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    hey i see a good amount of work here. keep up with the studies, especially those color studies. Color is really a vast topic and think picking up James Gurney's Color and light would really give you a nice start. But you're doing good! keep them coming!

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    @yong , thanks for the encouragement!

    study!
    used the gurney foldup which was stashed in between one of my IFX mags,
    didn't turn out so well i feel. will be doing more of it in the coming week.

    eva drawing!

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    fruit again.

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    daily painting practise!
    hope i'm getting better at colours!

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    hey :] your digital studies look good, keep doing them regularly and i'm sure you'll improve in no time. i would also say do a lot of traditional studies, like figure drawings, a book i would recommend reading is the 'vilppu drawing manual', you can find it easily online.
    keep updating your sketchbook, i will watch your progress!

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    @plaid, interesting book. thanks for pointing that out haha. I will be posting the life drawings i've been doing, just couldn't find time to take proper pictures

    anyways. fish for thought for everyone else!

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    a small update

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    greek bust study

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    argh, study!
    can't stand the hair!

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    random sketches.......

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    always nice to see figure studies ..keep it up

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    did mostly faces this week.
    did a mix of references, live observation and imagination

    and wooohoo!! figure drawing class! only showed the model's rear and face, the rest were...-_-

    and robocop! picture study again, but not completed though

    @saran, thks!!

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    trying new ways to render people!

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    some non human practise!

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