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    MOAR CRITS!

    hey guys, i've loitered around CA for awhile, but haven't really posted due to lack of time (excuse i know )

    so yep, gonna start this thread as a source of critique and motivation from you ppl


    and some random sketch i did, just trying to play around with the colors and keep the sketchy-ness to a minimum

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    new stuff always at the last page!

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    short intro of myself, yan from Singapore.
    Likes to spend time doodling on random stuff.

    Came back to update this sketchbook, since i felt like i hit a roadblock for improvement.

    heady study;

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    test test with smaller pic

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    sketches.............

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    a quick colour study i did today!

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    quick crit?

    anyone?

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    bunch of sketches,
    need a goal to accomplish, so i wont feel so er, static

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    some random studies, looks like i'm stuck with colours, any ideas on how to progress?

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    Hey Yan, stuff is looking good. I like it. As far as crits and comments. I would say to maybe just take a little more time when you're drawing. Think about the lines a little bit before you place them, make sure they have a purpose. Besides that, keep up with the life and photo studies. You're on the right track!

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    @jNeumann, thanks man, trying my best to focus on these studies

    played with colours more again today
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    bump up for random stuff!

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    bump for colour study!

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    I think you are doing a fine job with these, but you can push them much further and improve faster if you really slow down and try to get as detailed as possible. I learned this from taking lessons with Jason Seiler... It's better to see if you can get one piece to look really realistic ( maybe photorealistic ) than to do a bunch of studies that aren't to that level.

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