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May 13th, 2008 #1
Hi guys ! My name is Amilton and im from Brazil, student of Design.
Someday i really want to be a concept artist but living here at brazil its a little impossible, well anyway i'm trying to make a portfólio trying to get a job as a ilusstrator and i'm doing these flowers , any comment , critique is extrem welcome !!
thanks in advance
Hide this ad by registering as a memberMay 15th, 2008 #2
It's looking good so far. Are you going to finish the rest of the flowers or leave them in silhouette???
May 16th, 2008 #3
i've finished ... critique / advices are extreamealy welcome
May 16th, 2008 #4
I like how you rendered the petals for the most part. My primary concern is the lack of time spent on the leaves (when compared to the petals of course). Given the type of image, typically blurred edges won't be in order, unless executed perfectly. Here you have blurred in a manner that a camera lens would, which is contrary to the painterly approach that one would expect (crisp edges in light, blurred edges in shadow, etc.)
The stigma and stamen of the flower appear to be painted onto the petals. Try to work more on their individual highlights and shadows, as well as cast shadows onto the petals. In fact, try to take better care of the cast shadows from one petal onto the next. Additionally, the piece could also use more texture overall.
Like what you've done. Keep it up and best of luck
May 16th, 2008 #5
May 30th, 2008 #6
Hey thanks a lot aboput all critiques, they were really helpful ... i made some changes i hope it's better now ... i haven't done evrything u all said cause im a litle tired of this pic ... so i think its toime start another i feel really lazy drawing like this ... i need to draw to much more !