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    [Concept - Humming Wasp]

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    Update 2008-09-28 Story p1-10

    I moved this from another post to here to keep everything together.

    I don't know how to delete my own post so I have to leave that one there.


    [L e o n Story Book Chapter 01 p1-5]

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    Quote Originally Posted by Runya Jade View Post
    The colors are amazing and your art is so very fresh and exciting. Honestly I don't see anything wrong with your anatomy or painting style, it's just that a style. I wonder how many times Picasso heard people saying his anatomy needed work. Kudos on seeking to become better, a fellow artist after my own heart.
    Looking forward to seeing more of your work.
    Picasso mastered realism and classicism before he went on to break ground in cubism. Most of the highly stylized "greats" have a solid foundation in life drawing. That being said, you have a lovely style (the Leon storybook is laid out very nicely indeed, and the colours glow). I just agree that having more practice in real anatomy (etc.) will strengthen your style even more. The faces of the girls seem repetitive, which might be due to the anime influence..

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    I suppose you have the point there. With both the anatomy and the face part, as said by many. I guess the only way is to make move practice of real people. Thanks for your comment here. ^^

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    waaa this is sooo good love this style you got

    KEEP POSTING MORE damn this is nice

    can you post the sketches also? the first thing you start with..
    please

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    cool style, work on structure to get more volume in your stuff. Your stuff is really artistic, its great.

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    Your color use is bold. You use the full range of values available to you. You build textures that really enhance the aesthetic appeal of the images. Your compositions are bold. You have a lot of potential.

    The one bit of advice I would give you right now is do lots of observational drawing. Figure drawing in particular will benefit you. Get a sketchbook and draw from life in it every day. Draw people, draw buildings, draw plants, draw cars and mechanical things. Everything you draw will teach you something. Don't stylize just observe and recreate. Trying to recreate what you see will help you gain more control over proportion weight and gesture. You build those fundamentals and you are going to be really excellent.

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    Update 2008-09-28 Story p6-10

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    Continuation from the story pages...


    [L e o n Story Book Chapter 01 p6-10]

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    to ej:

    Hmm I don't usually put unfinished works up. And also, since I start by traditional medium and finish with photoshop, by means of sketch I assume you're talking about pencil sketch? If so, I'll put a few up here then.

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    Thanks for the comment. I went to see your sketchbook as well and man you got some real nice stuff too!

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    subtle squid:

    Thanks for the comment. Yes your words hit right to the spot - I lack of fundamental skills as many has pointed out. I'm working on it now hope I can get better soon.

    I went to your website, hey some nice work there too. Why not post your stuffs in here?

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    I was talking about the pencil sketch yes
    i would like to see them without all those colors

    love your stuff

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    yep yep, I love your work but you need to work on your "anatomy", mainly faces. I struggle in this area too, love the watercolor feel to all of this I love it! Don't get discouraged just work on your basics while you still paint. I am going to watch your progress.

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    Along with the others have said, you could really work on facial expressions. 90% of what you have posted have the same pout. It struck me so much it almost took away the amount of work you've done painting.

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    Update 2008-09-28 Concepts & Sketches

    [Practice 035]

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    [Practice 036 - Jerks' Dream]

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    Adding pencil sketches due to request of 'ej. Most of them are bits from here and there, very rough state. I try to put them together as clear as I can.



    [Pencil Draft 01]

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    You've got loads of style, but I think it's too early to be doing it this much. Do lots of life drawing so you can add more substance underneath. Realistic drawing goes a long way. Definitely try different faces too, and learn the structure of the face. A lot of these heads look like balloons. Are you a fan of Yoshitaka Amano and Yoji Shinkawa? I think their styles show through in the "TOS Spec Draft."

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    Update 2008-12-13

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    Animalea Scene 01

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    Why is this in the critique center. It's so cute, sweet and stylized, we can't advise anything. It's genuine and you shouldn't change a thing. This should be under sketch books.

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    I love your colour choices! One thing I did notice though, is that at first glance, all your faces look the same. The same expression, the same proportions, etc. I'd love to see some more extreme expressions in this style.

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    Second the idea to move to SB section,
    only one crit that hasent been said yet
    in the comics having black as your page color and as
    most pieces bg color blurrse the composition, and i cant really
    tell where the piece stops, spacifficly post 32
    but i think youve change the format since then

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    Leon story book page 11-13

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    Continuation from the story pages...


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    Invasion March in Night Mist

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    Thanks for the comments to Raoul Duke, Ayem, and Demo. Sorry for not knowing much about how this forum works. If moving to the sketch book section is more appropriate to this thread, is it possible to ask the admin to move this entire thread to there [as they moved it from finally finished to here] so I can continue using this old thread ?

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    You've a solid grasp of color usage and the proper application for creating mood.

    Just solidify your anatomy, and your artistic journey, will be phenomenal!

    "Everything must serve the idea. The means used to convey the idea should be the simplest and clear. Just what is required. No extra images. To me this is a universal principle of art. Saying as much as possible with a minimum of means."
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    [Monster Concept 03 - Day of Peril]

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    [Youni Evix - Vice Principle in Youth, Leon page 9-11]

    Rough concept, anatomy all incorrect

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    ahhhh thx for posting those sketches
    they are beautifull!! nice lines!

    updates are great too!!

    thx for all the posts!

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