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    Hello, this seems like a pretty helpful board, so if anyone could give me any critiques or comments, I'd appreciate it. Thanks!

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    His arms and legs are both different sizes, which means you need to work on your foreshortening, which means you probably have to work on building up a mental model of the figure, period. Less manga, more life drawing. Check out Loomis' Figure Drawing For All It's Worth (links are in the wiki).


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    you have done a decent job of shading, if you were going for cell shaded.

    Listen to Elwell... go study some loomis. Get your proportions worked out. The left leg and right arm are both smaller than the others. that right arm should be biggest due to foreshortening.

    His hair would also have to be so full of product that it is solid... otherwise it would fall and reveal his face.

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    Thanks for the suggestions. I was trying to do foreshortening, but I need to work on it more. I'll try to do some more anatomy practice

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