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    Park's work (Feedback please)

    Hello, I'm very beginner of drawing.
    These are my 30s croquis and more.
    Every critique will be thanked.
    If my English is bad, sorry about that.


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    You have very nice lines. keep practicing those lines. Here is a good book you could find usefull : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=07fusT-dwVE. It's very good for gesture drawing. also check Proko on youtube, or andrew Loomis's figure drawing for what it's worth. Keep up the good work!

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    day2

    another 15 30s croquis
    thanx for your advice
    I changed my way a bit
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    only 8 30s croquis today because my sketch book pages ran out.

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    another 15 30s croquis.
    I tried to apply force on drawing.
    Time was not enough maybe because I'm not used to this yet

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    There's a noticable improvement in your line work in those last gestures. Since you mentioned being a complete beginner, consider that the knowledge of perspective, form and anatomy will make a big difference in the quality of your gesture drawings. It really all comes down to knowing and applying the fundamentals so at this point those should be your focus. Keep it up!

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    Thanks for your saying!
    I'm keep trying right now
    again, 30s croquis and some loomis studying


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    What I don't understand in loomis book is the thing about flat diagram.
    units must be smaller when it is far from me but how can I know how much smaller it should be?

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    another 30s croquis for today

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    loomis studying

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