my name is bapsi
i'm 16 years old and i want to become a concept designer. please help me out with a crit, i want to go to art center after high school! D:
My first still since, iono..sixth grade?
Sorry for the bad photo quality.
I really want to take a figure drawing class soon, I hear it helps someone out a lot.
All I have is posemaniacs to practice with.
I think those are 15 second pose things or something.
Lemme know if my attachments are too big. I'll resize.
Last edited by a la bapsi; September 2nd, 2008 at 10:35 PM.
But anyway, really like the horned guy. The profile is perfect, though watch the shading on the lips. One parts makes it look like he has a swollen lip. The horns are okay, though they could use some more curve. Love to see more!
Ink pieces for my AP 2d design class thing.
I like my eye and patience for detail, but what I don't like is how I tend to go overboard with it and make my piece look cluttered and alskdjfsd.
Currently trying to work on that.
Crits on how I can do better in my future pieces?
Last edited by a la bapsi; April 27th, 2008 at 07:43 PM. Reason: second picture was too big. D:
Went to Barnes and Noble with daaaad, and saw one of those brown sketchbooks.
I wanted one, just to abuse white charcoal/pencil.
Skipped the front page for reasons I just don't understand, and drew a..satyr head.
I suck at drawing the other eye.
Any tips for an angle like this one?
Last edited by a la bapsi; September 2nd, 2008 at 10:36 PM.
this recent one:
I wouldn't worry about getting the whole shape of the eye you would normally see at a full frontal. don't like the eye overlap the shape of the face on that side, like it jutting out weird. Part of the eye is usually kinda hidden by the nose but it depends on how set back the eyes are.
Its a good sketch so far, just try something
The assignment with the orange color:
You have a pretty good balance with detail. Remember to give it some negative or white space with 2D design. The sharp feathers give it kind of an aggressive feel - dunno if that was your intention.
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