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    Aut0n's Sketchbook! Contains Lots of Beards (Updated TODAY!)

    Hey, I just joined here a few days ago, loving all the stuff I've seen so far. Wanted to get some actual criticism instead of all the useless praise back over at DeviantArt. I look forward to exploring this site more.

    Aut0n's Sketchbook! Contains Lots of Beards (Updated TODAY!)
    Aut0n's Sketchbook! Contains Lots of Beards (Updated TODAY!)
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    Thanks for the comment! Here's some more stuff, this is all digital.

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    Very nice cartoon style, only complaint is to make the fingers on the short fat guy in the first piece look like fingers instead of claws. Otherwise great work.

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    One more.

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    Ah. You play Team Fortress 2. That's nice. I feel slightly confused looking at the demomans chair, and his pose isn't entirely convincing, but I really like your style and your lines.

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    good cartoon style! I like it. Maybe you could think to make it a little more clean, special on outline.

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    Thanks for the comments everyone. Anjin, what do you mean by making it a little bit more clean?

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    Some sketches from my smaller sketchbooks.

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    Ha ha, Freud. Anyway, it looks as if you've got your cartoony style wrapped up nicely, but there is one thing that I'm not seeing (and believe me, I learnt this doing my Animation diploma): that is action/emotive/characterful poses.

    So far you've got character designs down and that's good, but it'll be useless in your portfolio if it doesn't show any of them "being" something. I tell you what, I'd love to see that dwarf guy with the axe just volcanic mad, like he's about to cut a boulder in two. Or maybe your coboy vigilante with all guns blazing whilst jumping through the air. That would be cool, but more importantly, show how good you really are.

    I'm going to subscribe to this thread; I want to see how you do!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Aut0n View Post
    Thanks for the comments everyone. Anjin, what do you mean by making it a little bit more clean?
    the line of "ink", sometimes, you give a cartoon style to a color verison, the cartoon style need in my opinion a clean inked lineartem without lines crossing each other like a sketch. Sorry if I express myself with a bad english...

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    I agree with phix! Put more personality into your carachters and they will be more entertaining!
    But anyway, I really like your style, dude! Keep it up!

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    Quote Originally Posted by phix View Post
    Ha ha, Freud. Anyway, it looks as if you've got your cartoony style wrapped up nicely, but there is one thing that I'm not seeing (and believe me, I learnt this doing my Animation diploma): that is action/emotive/characterful poses.

    So far you've got character designs down and that's good, but it'll be useless in your portfolio if it doesn't show any of them "being" something. I tell you what, I'd love to see that dwarf guy with the axe just volcanic mad, like he's about to cut a boulder in two. Or maybe your coboy vigilante with all guns blazing whilst jumping through the air. That would be cool, but more importantly, show how good you really are.

    I'm going to subscribe to this thread; I want to see how you do!
    THanks for the feedback and the kind words , I noticed that I need to do more of that as well when I poked around the forums here. I'm definitely going to start working on it.

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