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April 24th, 2008 #1
Aut0n's Sketchbook! Contains Lots of Beards (Updated TODAY!)
Hey, I just joined here a few days ago, loving all the stuff I've seen so far. Wanted to get some actual criticism instead of all the useless praise back over at DeviantArt. I look forward to exploring this site more.
Last edited by Aut0n; October 12th, 2010 at 07:14 PM.
Hide this ad by registering as a memberApril 25th, 2008 #2
very cool style man!!!
April 30th, 2008 #3
Thanks for the comment! Here's some more stuff, this is all digital.
April 30th, 2008 #4Tattoo Artist
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Very nice cartoon style, only complaint is to make the fingers on the short fat guy in the first piece look like fingers instead of claws. Otherwise great work.
May 3rd, 2008 #5
May 3rd, 2008 #6Registered User
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Ah. You play Team Fortress 2. That's nice. I feel slightly confused looking at the demomans chair, and his pose isn't entirely convincing, but I really like your style and your lines.
May 3rd, 2008 #7
May 3rd, 2008 #8
Thanks for the comments everyone. Anjin, what do you mean by making it a little bit more clean?
May 3rd, 2008 #9
May 3rd, 2008 #10
Ha ha, Freud. Anyway, it looks as if you've got your cartoony style wrapped up nicely, but there is one thing that I'm not seeing (and believe me, I learnt this doing my Animation diploma): that is action/emotive/characterful poses.
So far you've got character designs down and that's good, but it'll be useless in your portfolio if it doesn't show any of them "being" something. I tell you what, I'd love to see that dwarf guy with the axe just volcanic mad, like he's about to cut a boulder in two. Or maybe your coboy vigilante with all guns blazing whilst jumping through the air. That would be cool, but more importantly, show how good you really are.
I'm going to subscribe to this thread; I want to see how you do!
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