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    KOF Kyo Kusanagi fanart WIP

    I'm always doing a dozen things at a time.

    This is some fanart I felt like doing tonight.
    Mainly blocked out the colors.

    He should've looking like he's just jumped sideways and his upper torso's spinning, but now it looks like he's falling.

    Anyways, here it is, before I finalize it and maybe ruin the piece by making it too stiff.

    KOF Kyo Kusanagi fanart WIP

    Oh yeah, C&C, help, paintover, and/or any suggestion is highly appreciated.

    edit: I just added the flames, that's why there's no light casting on him.
    Last edited by morphine; October 15th, 2002 at 01:13 AM.

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    1) it looks like kyo has nice firm breasts..

    2) the pinky on the hand should be smaller.

    3) I'm not of fan of scrible, so i think you should be bold and color over your linework. Esp over the flame/hand area.

    Those are my 3 main problems with it. Hope that helps some...

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