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    Quote Originally Posted by el coro View Post
    thanks again for looking, and if anyones ees anything off or naggingly wrong, please let me know! i appreciate every bit of insight i can get.

    c36
    Now that you've mentioned it, the last panel of page 32 has something that is bothering me. The placement of the big dude is a bit odd. I know that he's behind the characters but his lowered hand actually feels closer to the viewer and in front of the others. So it's a bit confusing to look at.

    By the way, did you use Painter for this? I ask because of the brush strokes that resemble a painterly brush. Or was it just a photoshop brush?

    Thanks!


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    aaaaa yes man! love the new pages and cool mothhead cameo!
    again, the time,effort and skills you put into this are really worth it, and show thru every page and panel.I was just wondering, are you going to keep the storyboard-videogame sequences at the beginning in the published version as well? just curious.

    can't wait to see more!

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    'Let me smash those tears away!'
    This is the best comic Ive read since Top10, I love it. It reminds me of Tim Power's Chandleresque sleazy LA ghost scene. I will buy it and when that money hits your account please have a drink on me man.
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    And it won't stop... fucking unbelievable man. Speechless, inspired, and now I clearly have no idea how you are able to sleep or not sleep.
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    Damnit, Coro! My pc crashed! I'll try again tomorrow!

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    hey guys, wanted to update this and thread and also announce that i am going to be interviewed by the one and only Bobby Chiu this monday October 19th in the afternoon at 2:00 pacific time on his ustream channel:

    http://www.ustream.tv/channel/bobby-chiu-broadcasting

    so come by if you can...im really looking forward to it.


    alesoun: dammit!! its getting to be a killer download at this point...also if yo want you can look at transientman.com, the images load individually there

    Bomba: HEYA NEIGHBOR! felix is our booth neighbor at the APE convention going on this weekind here in sf...you are too kind homie. as my man freedom williams once said, "im just a squirrel, trying to get a nut, to make you move your butt to the dance floor."

    Velocity Kendall: awww man thanks so much! really means alot coming from a certified badass such as yourself. i just gotta finish it now!!!

    TheGnoll: thanks man. naw gonna redo those once im done with the ending. shouldnt be too hard...but i want the format to be as smooth as possible, its worth reworking those six pages.

    Dizon: i totally see what you mean. i wanted to include that candy bar in the scene, but im inclined to lose that entire hand. it doesnt help the composition at all. good call! thanks!

    thanks again for looking guys. ill update as soon as i have some new stuff to show.


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    Badass!!! Thanks for posting this stuff. I can't wait for the rest... just can't.

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    This shit is amazing, love how the story is progressing, I never liked reading any type of comic online but this i just can't stop reading it. Looking forward to more pages!

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    Coro,

    I've been scoping out Transientman- huge endeavor! I'm excited to see where it all goes. Keep cranking!

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    absolutely gorgeous work! that citiscape with the mini powerplant was stunning! Youre a master of urban cinema and the story is absolutely wonderful! It was a pleasure meeting you at the Apecon and if Im not mistaken... werent you sketching away at perchance another page layout for said Transient...? In any case, thanks for so actively sharing and i hope this project gets the full recognition for all its demonstrations of genius.... esp. the masterful use of compositional cock and balls....

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    While reading this - Apostle's "Something I must do" kept playing in my head. He does the poetic version on youtube and if you like that check his myspace.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1CdpdcFaQQo

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    Blissfully enjoying the new awesome. You are part of the resistance which forestalls the tide of crap that threatens to engulf everything.

    Glad you make stuff.

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    Coro,
    Your the president of I'mtheShitsVille for sure. I completely agree with CryptCrawler on this one. The way your eye bounces from text to imagery perfectly makes it feel like I'm watching a movie. I couldn't believe when I saw those little dudes from the MB book, I was delighted like a little girl when I saw that. Keep pushing hard, it's jaw-droppingly inspiring.
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    I'd never really read through the whole comic. I just did.

    And now I can't wait for the next page.

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