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    Please criticize my sketches!

    Good day!My name is Andrey Sinyavsky and I am 18 years old artist from Kiev(Ukraine).I am a new men on this forum.Today I posted one unfinished my work(Robots) and a few pensil sketches. Please don't afraid to criticize my work!

    PS:plase sorry me for y English,I am try to study it well,but not yet)


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    Great start. I would keep an eye on your proportions a bit. But your sense of anatomy is pretty good. Any chance of seeing a finished digital piece?
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    You really have a firm hold on the basics of lighting and concept. To push your drawings further, I recommend that you study all the basics of both anatomy and proportion. There are areas where the limbs are too long, the neck feels too small, and your character's bodies don't have very much expression to them. If you can, do several model gesture drawings to both get a firm hold on how the human body works and to get a better idea of movement. Remember, the human body is not just biological, it is architectural; so ask yourself, if your human bodies were sculptures, would they be able to hold in place.

    I have to say that your shading is excellent. Work on your anatomy, and you'll be a great artist.

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    Cool man i agree with what hwillis* said go keep working on your basics you can never practice them enough and post em too i want more!!!.

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    dear friend ur work willb great..
    u should check u few prob,,,just like detaling of anatomy,,which is must in ur charaacter its my thinkking
    hi my self rajiv kumar sharma...
    n im studying art ..im a painting student but i wanna
    to do something in illustration field ..but i have no knowledge ....

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kaffinated View Post
    Great start. I would keep an eye on your proportions a bit. But your sense of anatomy is pretty good. Any chance of seeing a finished digital piece?
    Sorry,but now I already dislike this picture
    Today-some new pictures.And one of is unfinished digital picture with a melancholy marine)I hope I'll finish it in a few days

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    You need a ride on the anatomy train.
    After that, it will improve.
    Good stuff by the way.

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    Good day,guys.Its my new WIP.I need to help with the colour solution.Maybe I will do it more violet or blue,or more darken?

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    I like this last work, but it seems complex and unorganized. I'd suggest a more prominent focal point, or light source emphasizing the focal point.
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    bike concept is good however the newest colored WIP is not It is very disorganized and the eye has no starting place or path to follow, it will need some serious work if you want to formalize it

    This one is really nice keep it up and focus on the anatomy in your poses
    -jedininja

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    Neo Cossack)

    Cossacks was ukrainian heroes in 14-17 centuryies.They save Ukraine and protect it from the Russia.

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    awesome! i dig the cossack! was nestor makhno not a cossack? he also fought against the russians (the red army) right after the russian revolution.

    anyways, i think you've got some promising looking work here! the lighting on the cossack is awesome; however, his midsection looks a bit stretched; too long!

    the motorbike i'd day is your best work on here so far.
    keep it up and keep posting!!!
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