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March 31st, 2008 #1
Please criticize my sketches!
Good day!My name is Andrey Sinyavsky and I am 18 years old artist from Kiev(Ukraine).I am a new men on this forum.Today I posted one unfinished my work(Robots) and a few pensil sketches. Please don't afraid to criticize my work!
PS:plase sorry me for y English,I am try to study it well,but not yet)
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Great start. I would keep an eye on your proportions a bit. But your sense of anatomy is pretty good. Any chance of seeing a finished digital piece?
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You really have a firm hold on the basics of lighting and concept. To push your drawings further, I recommend that you study all the basics of both anatomy and proportion. There are areas where the limbs are too long, the neck feels too small, and your character's bodies don't have very much expression to them. If you can, do several model gesture drawings to both get a firm hold on how the human body works and to get a better idea of movement. Remember, the human body is not just biological, it is architectural; so ask yourself, if your human bodies were sculptures, would they be able to hold in place.
I have to say that your shading is excellent. Work on your anatomy, and you'll be a great artist.
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March 31st, 2008 #5rajraj246
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dear friend ur work willb great..
u should check u few prob,,,just like detaling of anatomy,,which is must in ur charaacter its my thinkking
hi my self rajiv kumar sharma...
n im studying art ..im a painting student but i wanna
to do something in illustration field ..but i have no knowledge ....
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July 24th, 2008 #10
Good day,guys.Its my new WIP.I need to help with the colour solution.Maybe I will do it more violet or blue,or more darken?
July 24th, 2008 #11
I like this last work, but it seems complex and unorganized. I'd suggest a more prominent focal point, or light source emphasizing the focal point.
Check out my sketchbook
July 25th, 2008 #12
bike concept is good however the newest colored WIP is not It is very disorganized and the eye has no starting place or path to follow, it will need some serious work if you want to formalize it
This one is really nice keep it up and focus on the anatomy in your poses
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August 23rd, 2008 #14
Cossacks was ukrainian heroes in 14-17 centuryies.They save Ukraine and protect it from the Russia.
August 23rd, 2008 #15
awesome! i dig the cossack! was nestor makhno not a cossack? he also fought against the russians (the red army) right after the russian revolution.
anyways, i think you've got some promising looking work here! the lighting on the cossack is awesome; however, his midsection looks a bit stretched; too long!
the motorbike i'd day is your best work on here so far.
keep it up and keep posting!!!
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September 25th, 2008 #18
Good day guys.This is DEVIL! Uaaaaaaghhhhh))))
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September 27th, 2008 #20
Some great ideas and charaters here. This last one seems a bit chalky and thin. Could do with a lot more work to help describe the form and lighting better - you need to work on his anatomy and proportions more too..
The touch of red in his belt looks very nice.
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hmm nice jobs i like your paintings i like their colors and your dravings are cool on balance theirs shadows and lights take care
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October 3rd, 2008 #26
nice nothing even worth critisizing
May 17th, 2009 #27
Good day.guys!How are you?
Today I'll post new my picture title "Baba Yaga"))
BabaYaga is the famous character of many rus tailes.
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May 17th, 2009 #29
Great stuff man... I really liked the Lucifer pic.... very nice....you seem to draw a lot of inspiration from mythology and legends.. It's really nice stuff man. And I know everyone alreaDY said this but 1 of the only things lacking is proportion--- but even that got better as i scrolled down the page. nice work man. keep it up
PS: Love your colours
Do check out my work in my sketchbook
and my clay modelling thread
May 17th, 2009 #30