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Thread: The Dusk
March 30th, 2008 #1
Hi all, this is my first post in this section. I am not good at painting and designing. But I am trying and learning. I have done this one by photoshop. Please check it out and leave comment. Thanks
S M Asif
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March 30th, 2008 #3
First, I think this picture’s been done very well. There’s a lot of stuff I like in it. The truck lights in front, the red tail light in back, the street lamp and the bird on the phone wire. All are nice touches.
Now the truck itself is really messing with my eyes. It may be blured because of the motion, which would be correct, but I think it would be more interesting if it were sharper (a little more in focus) and slightly darker than the rest of the pic. JMO
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Almost there but you need to get some fine and hard lines in this. Maybe the foreground? And I'm not big on the truck being smack dab in the middle. But im still likeing this.
March 31st, 2008 #5
I like what you've done so far.
If you made the truck a hard object instead of a soft blur, it would add a lot of focus. I don't think blurring the truck to show motion is a good idea, either. Maybe add a poof of exhaust or trailing debris instead. The top of the picture needs something, and the truck doesn't belong directly in the middle of the image. Just my $0.02.
This isn't on the level of Finally Finished yet. It should be in the Critiques section.
April 1st, 2008 #6
Thanks to all. Actually I blurred the truck because I want to mean there are lot of dust. But I will try with sharpen truck as you suggested.
S M Asif