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March 30th, 2008 #1
Evergrey's Adventures ^_^ comments and crits are always welcome :D
Time for an introduction I think.
Hi, im from sweden! I've recently finished my bachelor's degree in biology, and now I am focusing on a carreer in art. I would like to work with concept art for video games or movies, or as a freelance illustrator. I very much want to improve, so constructive critisism is always much appreciated! =)
Thanks for stopping by, and may the force be with you! ^^
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So heres my first posted pic, yay.
Its just a sketch, but i mean this is a sketchbook so that should be no problem hehe. I've been working mainly on her eyes, mouth and hair, the rest i'm gonna update soon i hope. And, im still quite new with photoshop so crits and ideas are very welcome. Anyways, here it is:
March 30th, 2008 #3
The hair besides her face looks better than the bangs, to me. I guess their smoothness is unfit for their jagged bottom. Or maybe I'm rambling The mouth is a little off to one side.
Hard to say anything else at this stage, but I think it's looking good. Welcome to the site :3
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March 31st, 2008 #4
its really blurry and the face is a littel bit distorted, even when not doing photorealistic renders try to keap the features and proportions corect, hers a littel diagram of the face features i posted in another therad, just scroll down.
March 31st, 2008 #5
I think her left shoulder (on the right) needs to be more solid. It will allow the hair to fall back and look more natural. The chin could use some shading to blend it in, although it does look more powerful at the moment.
Also, does her skin have to be pure white? If it does, darken the blackground to give contrast and strengthen the image.
April 1st, 2008 #6
Wow! I think i can agreed with all of you so far, thanks so much for commenting! I mean, its really helpful!!
Okay then, here's a requested update (hehe):
April 1st, 2008 #7
wow, that turnet out really great, really like the reflective light on her head bow, im impressed!
u should color the dress and her skin to though.
April 4th, 2008 #8
Lotet: Waa, thank you, that made my day^^ I did have some problems in finding a dresscolor that both matched her wierd hair and helped keep the picture calm, still not sure if it's good but at least its ok, ill post later
i found one of my first ps-paintings, this frog, and i remade it a little and replaced the background. Its pose is not very creative i think so i made the bg make up for that so you wouldnt notice (...ehum) I know the whole pic is quite a blurry mess and its leg is totally wrong but ill fix a lot of that later.
April 5th, 2008 #9
i think its pretty decent, the BG is nicely rendered, the frog IS a littel wierd, sp ur right about that =P
though whats bothering me most is the horison line, which dosnt match the perspective and the frog in the 4ground.
in short, the horison line is to much up to the top of the pic, but overall its pretty-not-that-actuly-bad (yes, thats a word...now)
keep it up.
April 6th, 2008 #10
so heres the final (i hope) version of the girl. anything more and i just might end up transforming her into a vogon or something.
And also heres a centaur i painted over last night and tonight. i think you could call it a speedie, i sure took my time though. no plans on finishing this one! each time i say i will i just end up getting embarassingly bored of it so better not say things like that.
the frog's gonna be lost for some time, (same reason as i mentioned) but crits makes sense. thanks! =P
April 7th, 2008 #11
nice update, the girl looks good in color!
and the centaurus is pretty not that bad at all, though thers some freaky anthomy going on below hes stomach, totaly not okay lol
anywy, good work, keep it up^^
April 7th, 2008 #12
sup those parts were really as bad as i thought then hehe. below-his-stomach was my major problem since there could naturally not be any centaurus anatomy and im not familiar enough with anatomy stuff to see how it should look if there was. but i'll ignore the centaurus until i get better at the anatomy. glad you think the rest was at least not-that-bad (liking that word)^^
just a small update today. i think the most overall common crit is the one about anatomy and proportions and me to should definitely spend some time on that. this ones practically just a copy of a proportions pic i found on google (thats great: "dont blame me!" lol), i thought i should start with such copies and studies until basic anatomy is stuck in my head. then i might start paint more out of imagination. big words, ill do my best to try and stick to them, hehe.
damn, i talk too much, should definitly paint more instead x)
April 8th, 2008 #13
haha, thats good ur starting to work on anathomy, try getting more mucles onto the bodey too, overexagurate and draw every singel muscle on him, its easier to understand how things work if u understand the mucless, and makes all the other stuff easier too.
personaly (or well, actuly totaly ripping of Cole Eastbursn teqnice)i think its best to start of with the skeleton, so u get how everything is build on top of that.