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    and here is the concept page


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    Go dude go!

    For the front side and back sheet i will get rid of the white squares

    just leave your elements against the dark background and do some
    thin lines in the back of characters and the angel gun to show
    relations of highest peak on the character, midpoint or center and bottom

    hope that made sense

    for the last page, i think everything calls for attention and is to busy
    you gotta be selective i know you did a lot of work on this but showcasing
    the best sketches is better

    i would pick the creature sketches of the top left all those are awesome
    pick 4 or 5 designs of head, arms and armour and include a text for those
    like armour brainstorming or something like that

    show the evolution on the angel gun and mount back piece how it started
    and how it ended and the sculptey photo and the pencil thumbnails to the bottom left as progress for your final illo

    that's my 2 cent , i like your character

    on a quick note, remember to include the colors or logo of the forum you are
    participating with on your character , a quick read to the submission rules wouldn't hurt just to check everything

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    Quote Originally Posted by robogabo View Post
    Go dude go!

    For the front side and back sheet i will get rid of the white squares

    just leave your elements against the dark background and do some
    thin lines in the back of characters and the angel gun to show
    relations of highest peak on the character, midpoint or center and bottom

    hope that made sense

    for the last page, i think everything calls for attention and is to busy
    you gotta be selective i know you did a lot of work on this but showcasing
    the best sketches is better

    i would pick the creature sketches of the top left all those are awesome
    pick 4 or 5 designs of head, arms and armour and include a text for those
    like armour brainstorming or something like that

    show the evolution on the angel gun and mount back piece how it started
    and how it ended and the sculptey photo and the pencil thumbnails to the bottom left as progress for your final illo

    that's my 2 cent , i like your character

    on a quick note, remember to include the colors or logo of the forum you are
    participating with on your character , a quick read to the submission rules wouldn't hurt just to check everything
    OH... My... GoD!!! Hahaha your a life saver! Every thing you say will be done! :-D

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    heres the new Turnarounds!


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    and here is the refined concept page


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    your drawing and design are soo sick, but i was a little let down when i saw the illustration. i think you couldve really pushed it further. i did a super rough lil paint over, i hope you dont mind.

    all im showing is how much more you could push the lighting and glows/colors,(more contrasts) to create a richer mood.

    good luck,

    ps. try different layer options to create better effects, (multiply, screen, color dodge.. ect..)

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    Quote Originally Posted by stephen View Post
    your drawing and design are soo sick, but i was a little let down when i saw the illustration. i think you couldve really pushed it further. i did a super rough lil paint over, i hope you dont mind.

    all im showing is how much more you could push the lighting and glows/colors,(more contrasts) to create a richer mood.

    good luck,

    ps. try different layer options to create better effects, (multiply, screen, color dodge.. ect..)
    Oh man! thats so eFen COool! i just cam in my pants a single drop! hahaha come over and show me everything you did hahah I'm just gonna turn in your draw over and call it a day haha
    haha well i have 25 hours and 14 mins tell its due! illl see what i can do!

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    okie dokie! I took everything stephen did to heart and came out with this


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    intersting work in here mate I think ill keep a watch on.

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    YAY!!!! IM DONE!!!! haha thanks to everyone who commented! and special thanks to stephen and robogabo!
    and here are the final versions of all three pages







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    Quote Originally Posted by Robert.B View Post
    intersting work in here mate I think ill keep a watch on.
    Thanks Robert!

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