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    The most frightening thing I could think of, a monster that makes you responsible for another human being. once one of these babies touches you you become it's parent, so be careful, always use protection. any color crit's would be very welcome on a more serious note.

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    color spacial pulls....

    right now you pull your color...or push your color...for space. the reds in the background are slightly more desaturated due to atmosphere. however that can happen on one form too...ie there is an opportunity to push or pull the saturation of the reds as they move into the picture plane or come forward toward the viewer.

    you could crisp up your focal areas so they eye can rest too. your call there.

    is nicely drawn...i think my first response was that the edges of the image look unfinished and it would present better with clean borders. Nothing wrong with broken borders and all, if it is purposeful. Right now I am not convinced it is.

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    thanks for the comments. yeah the border is a little rough on the left side.

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