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    A couple of Characters... UPDATED March 11

    UPDATED ART ALWAYS AT BOTTOM OF THREAD.

    All comments and crits welcome.
    Last edited by Artworkguy; March 11th, 2008 at 08:16 AM.
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    Super costumes. I'd say add a little more definition to the girl's face with form shadows, in the same way you finished the depth on the man's face, because it looks flat on the edges.
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    another one...

    Here's a monk/druid thing.

    eminkey 2003 - Thanks! Good point.
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    I love how you paint your characters, particularly with their clothes and folds. The character designs are pretty good too; they look awesome! The only thing that doesn't sit quit right are the hands- I think they look relatively small, and it was more noticeable for the guy with the short sword.
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    I like them, but the girls face could use a little more detail and definition. Very creative costumes, and great work on the paint.
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    Nice water colors,but take care of the construction of the characters,the left arm of the girl looks a bit strange.
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    Nice Stuff

    The girl looks like a kick ass version of Jennifer Connelly in The Labryith (if she had a gun).

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    she does have a gun
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    Thanks everyone for the nice words and feedback! I won't make it a habit of posting updated stuff in Finally Finished, but I got good suggestions that would take a minor effort to fix, so I did that. So here is the same stuff up above, but with a few minor tweaks, most notable, bigger hands, and more definition on girly face.

    Also a cartoony design. I didn't think the painted style worked well with these, so when I do more of these guys, I'll probably go with "cell shaded" line art... As soon as I figure out how to make as clean lines as Cheeks...
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