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    Matrix 4 - The Super Matrix

    I know that many people loved the Matrix Trilogy just as it ended in The Matrix Revolutions; but there were also many who wished that it would continue on. I’m one of the latter. I saw a whole new level where it could go. So, for fun (and practice!) I wrote another episode called Matrix 4-The Super Matrix.

    It's a completely new extension of the Matrix Trilogy and a bit of a mind bender, if I do say so myself. The story paints a picture of what might have happened before The Matrix and after The Matrix Revolutions; sort of a prequel/sequel, I guess. For me it ties a lot of loose ends together and brings the story full circle. If you're interested, you can download the full-length screenplay at my blog

    http://www.thesupermatrix.com

    Unless the Wachowski brothers or Warner Brothers approaches me, I have no illusions about this being made into a real movie. And I make no money or benefit from the story other than the fun of writing it and the pleasure of hearing people's comments. This screenplay is purely for the reading enjoyment of all those who love and believe in the Matrix mystique.

    If you read it, please come back here and let me know what you think. I'd love to know. Thanks and happy reading. PD Wood

    P.S. I originally posted this at the end of a four year old thread, but moved it to a new post because in hindsight I realized that few would probably read the old thread. I hope that's OK. If I'm not following forum protocol or this post is in the wrong place, please let me know. I don't want to ruffle any feathers. Thanks.

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    thank you for this

    as i read this man, its just a matter of time before the wachowskis come up to you to buy this

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    My Pleasure

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    I'm glad you think it's that good. Let's hope the Wachowski's feel the same way. Let me know what you think of it after you've finished the whole thing.

    PD Wood

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    The title just says it all man...super.

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    Super!

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    Is that your review after reading it, an endorsement of the title, or both.

    Let me know. PD Wood

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    This is sort of off topic (or maybe not) but when I was in fourth grade I wrote a Jurassic Park fan-fiction called 'Super Jurassic Park.'

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    this has truly inspired me. Im thinking of rewriting schindler's list im gonna call the schindler's Ultimate list of superdom!

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    Hey,

    Don't knock it, til you've read it.

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    When I was little I drew my own version of the Street Fighter characters and I called it "Super Street Fighter." I think I drew Guile as a cyborg.

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    I lost interest in the Matrix when I found out it was stolen.

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    Just because someone claims the Wachowskis stole their movie idea and unsuccessfully tries to sue them (as well as James Cameron, who apparently stole the idea for Terminator from the same story) for billions of dollars (a case which was dismissed because she provided no evidence of her claims whatsoever) doesn't mean the Matrix was actually stolen.



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    "Talent borrows,genius steals" - Oscar Wilde

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    There's already some sort of background story to the Metrix in Animetrix right ?

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    Animatrix

    The background story in the Animatrix is completely separate from my story in the Super Matrix. The Super Matrix locks into a whole new realm that will surprise you.

    PD Wood

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    i think 'ultimatrix' has a better ring to it. or 'alternatrix', that would open up a lot of speculation about the plot

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    Not as epic as The Matrix Return by Peter Chimaera.
    Neo was wake from sleeping and he shout at Trinity "Help you I think your dead"
    "No I am not" she said and she gotted some water drink.
    Morpheus walking into the bedroom "Good morning Neo we must kung fu"
    So they trained the jiu jitsu and martia larts.
    Neo kick him "Good job"

    "Morpheus we got a distress signal it is from Niobe"
    So they ran into the ship and they found Nioba and she was okay but there was a sentinal.
    Neo punched it. His hand was hurting very badly.
    "Neo you must be careful" Morphus said and shot the robot.
    "Wait" Neo said and he downloaded how to kill the sentinels. But it was too late and cause the machines created a new matrix.
    "No, we cannot our powers in the new matrix"
    Then Neo disconnected but he was looked dead, and they all told Niobe the sad news.
    "What happen in the first matrix" "They are all dead"

    "tihs is too much" Morphus shotted quietly "help me fight to save this"
    "i illh elp you" Trinity say with the cry she was sad cause thoughts neo was dead but it was matrix trick!
    Neo try to say help but his body wads frozedn
    "sOh no!" Merpheus say at teh radar screen "more matrix is attack us"
    "we will have to jug in" Trinity hooked her up
    Wehn they entared teh place was filled with Smiths because the matrix was curroopted with the matrix virus.
    "I'll fight this 500" Morpus said and he sworded out his katana at great attack.
    Trinity watch in amazing! "You are so good"
    "What's this" Morpeud read a data becauz he was fight agents and make them run, but the data said some information!
    "It say Neo is alife! We shuld wait go back to seak to him" and they tooks off by using phone interface.

    Neo was okay they finds because of mediskel equipmont.
    "The matrix is virused wso they cans not control the people any morR,. We arm not win yet but shall continue of the fight!"
    They aggreed and formed for strewngth so they could fight the matrix one other day
    "gentalmen the fight goes on" Neo said with fist and the crews cheered with new hope.


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    Half Life: Full Life CONSEQUENCES!


    Half Life: Full Life Consequences 2: What has TOBE DONE!


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    Quote Originally Posted by N D Hill View Post
    Half Life: Full Life CONSEQUENCES!


    Half Life: Full Life Consequences 2: What has TOBE DONE!
    Epic.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ninjacat11 View Post
    Epic.
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    lol funny video


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    Quote Originally Posted by 0kelvin View Post
    Just because someone claims the Wachowskis stole their movie idea and unsuccessfully tries to sue them (as well as James Cameron, who apparently stole the idea for Terminator from the same story) for billions of dollars (a case which was dismissed because she provided no evidence of her claims whatsoever) doesn't mean the Matrix was actually stolen.



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    no old lady came up with the terminator or the matrix.

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    The vids are epic, gotta love the cute music.

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    The Third Eye is (judging from the few pages available to read online) a poorly written, derivative piece of science fiction that uses extremely common themes. The only common element between The Matrix and The Terminator is the fact that humanity is fighting machines and that there is a chosen human destined to defeat them, a theme which was hardly invented in an obscure unpublished manuscript in the early 80's.



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    Quote Originally Posted by 0kelvin View Post
    Just because someone claims the Wachowskis stole their movie idea and unsuccessfully tries to sue them (as well as James Cameron, who apparently stole the idea for Terminator from the same story) for billions of dollars (a case which was dismissed because she provided no evidence of her claims whatsoever) doesn't mean the Matrix was actually stolen.



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    Never heard about either of those.

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    More fan fiction from the Hemmingway of our time, "Squirelking"

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    well, the title means a lot, saying don't knock the title when that title is that thing that makes you wanna read it is kinda dumb. just don't put super in there, thats all you gotta do. I'm sure theres a way around that and then a lot more people will be interested in the read rather than mocking you.

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    Matrix 4- The Super Matrix- Third Revision

    For anyone whose interested, I've recently posted a third revision on my site that juices up the action and slims down the dialogue. Hope you like it. PD Wood

    P.S. Mr. Delicious, I know the title is a bit hokey and puts some people off (sorta like Super Man or something), but I'm sticking with it for the mean time (unless someone comes up with something way Super Cooler). I'm open to suggestions.

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    The Super Cooler Matrix?

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    well super man is different, hes a staple of being like... the first super hero, which back then was something new. I'm not saying the story is bad, I read through some parts and its pretty solid. I just think if you brainstormed you could think up something better. Just matrix being in the title twice is kinda weird. Just something to replace super. idk, my two cents anyways

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