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    invinciblewombat VS SwimmingBird - JUDGED

    DEADLINE: monday 3/3 8:00 PM EST

    topic 8

    player 1 (SwimmingBird ): the failing light of battle
    A- you battle fatigue, your nuckels are raw and bloodied, but the day is yours.
    B- slumping in the cold the frost takes hold, your muscles tighten as the chill seeps deep into your flesh.

    player 2 (invinciblewombat) : making camp
    A - As the amber red sun sinks through the clouds you and your bretheren have made camp atop the battle summit.
    B - you awaken on a dead battlefield, you must have been knocked out cold or stunned for the majority of the carnage, all you can hear now are the moans of the half dead. you stand up slowly, alive but shamed.
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    k let's a duel

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    ill be player 1, scene A (because I have the same topic as JPC that starts today also)
    you be Player 2

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    cool, putting up deadline, lemme know if it's good for you

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    the deadline is fine wombat
    so which scene are you going to do. cant wait

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    im gonna go with B, lets do this.

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    kk. i might be able to post a wip up tonight

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    okay, here it goes

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    this looks awesome invinciblewombat. I love the simplicity of your rendering style, it's just really attractive to me for some reason. I would try and make the front characters head in light though, I think it would be a nice focal point. you could just shift that shadow a bit to pull it off I think. There should also be some blood on the blade(s) as well as some leading from swimmingbird's character to yours.

    I really hope you attack our duel in a similar fashion

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    Oh-h-h man... that is an inspired composition. The elegance of it is overwhelming. I have to agree with B-nine though, after a fashion. It looks like there should be more signs of a scuffle, unless you caught the opponent off guard. The snow is almost too pristine. Also, the sword and the axe make a bizarre parallel. I'd suggest altering the angle of one of them at least.

    Good show!
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    thanks for the crits guys, it's going to have to stay as is at the moment so i can get working on b-nine's duel but i will definitly be polishing it up more for portfolio work.

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    it looks nice wombat
    i only worked on mine for an hour
    ill see if i can furnish up my sketch in photoshop

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    wombat.... awesome... oh man..

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    i tried to make a british infantry grunt fighting in Valley Forge (1777 - 1778)
    I did Person 1, Scene A as agreed:
    A- you battle fatigue, your nuckels are raw and bloodied, but the day is yours.

    only worked for two hours on this so its just a sketch. I might work on it in the future for a portolio . .. .
    (sorry if its too big, dont know how to post pics that well)
    *0* I had about three minutes left until deadline so i was sweating this one out . . .. think we good to be judge yet?
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    Judging Alti Crx Grooveholmes

    2 Invincible wombat - very elegant- quiet compositoin and effective

    invincible wobat wins

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