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    Soft_Hands' Sketchbook

    Hey, I've been lurking around these forums for a few months and finally built enough courage to post my stuff. So here goes.

    First off some rough sketches of a knight and a female knight...
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    your off to a good start. however i would like to see more stuff from you so i could give better feedback. but from these i can suggest you work a bit more on anatomy and also try to use more long and flowing lines for your lineart. you can cover bigger areas with them and if you use them along w/ weighted line it will give your lineart a lot more clarity and contrast. it also makes your drawings look cleaner because they don't have the messy really sketchy feel to them. keep posting. and keep it up.
    To live is to create, to create is to live. Without art and music, I do not know how I would get by in my day to day life.

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    Welcome out of lurkage!
    I love the postures of these figures, there is a lot of energy in them. I especially like the curve out of the leg in the lower left figure though I wish her shoulders were set back further to continue that line and enhance the power of the stance... maybe less forward in the hip area so it wouldn't be unnatural for her shoulders to drop back farther. I also like the leaping attack posture, would be neat to see that idea/pose further fleshed out.
    Looking forward to more!
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    My attempt at a pin-up. Messed up on the right hand.
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    I know you, and you know me.. so yeah.
    lol
    Thats like, what, one part of the assignment done right there..
    now the crit.
    Hmm... I would say focus on line quality and whatnot.. like that second post you made, that and maybe try to make the shapes look 3 dimensional instead of 2d.. if that makes sense..
    thats my 2cents
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    Ugh... Haven't posted anything in a long time. May as well...
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    There's a lot of nice movement in your sketches. I especially like that one of the girl from the back. It's very sassy.

    Let's see some more! You started doing some different line weights in those last gestures, which is great.
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    Wow, really nice work. I'm lov'n the knights and the women that looks like a superhero. Great drawing. Come by my page when you find time. Keep up the great work
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    Attempts at pinups... lol at my linework.
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    Lol'd at the last one, nice girls

    Also awesome guy with goggles and bird!
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    Great sketches, i like your loos lines and character dezings, keep at it
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    Quote Originally Posted by Rockett View Post
    There's a lot of nice movement in your sketches. I especially like that one of the girl from the back. It's very sassy.

    Let's see some more! You started doing some different line weights in those last gestures, which is great.
    I agree you've got some truly great stuff here, keep at it.
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    Found a blue pencil it's pretty light on the eyes I guess. Critique please.
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