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Thread: Corrick vs. B-Nine -judged
February 26th, 2008 #1
Corrick vs. B-Nine -judged
player 1 (attacker):produces a sword
A- you lunge through the air focusing on the kill.
B- you glance a blow from your oponents sword and stick a longblade through their neck.
player 2 (defender) :produce a curver blade
A - you throw amber dust unto your oponents eyes as he prepares to lunge
B - you duck a massive swing of you oponents sword and jam your curved blade in his back
Starts tomorrow at 8 pm, ends Friday at 8 pm. And that's that.
Last edited by chaosrocks; March 2nd, 2008 at 11:39 PM.
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I'm going with option B... it's been done 100 times, but I can't thing of a cool and intimidating way to do amberdust off the top of my head right now heh.
and here's a real quick character sketch if you need it.
February 27th, 2008 #3
Sounds good to me. Number 101 coming up then... And I forgot, I'll be using the same character I've used the last three times.
February 28th, 2008 #4
FIX HER FACE Corrick my dear
To see the world in a grain of sand, and a heaven in a wildflower, hold infinity in the palm of your hand, and eternity in an hour.
February 28th, 2008 #5
here's my WIP. Gotta try and keep the action in-tact once I start rendering.
February 28th, 2008 #6
Quick WIP. Still working out the details, but this'll be a fairly simple move. Wanted to get the form down at least. Good start, BTW. "Ouch".
February 28th, 2008 #7
February 29th, 2008 #8
For some reason I put the wrong move in bold. Supposed to be "B".
Hope the face pleases. Saved it for last.
Last edited by Corrick; February 29th, 2008 at 10:36 PM.
February 29th, 2008 #9Infinity Engine
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Gosh, you are so skilled at rendering Corrick, I really love that feel of the materials. And nice work again on the art crusades pic, that pic was fantastic! Anyways, I gotta say the face is still unsatisfactory? I know you prolly hate to hear it, and I'll bet you spent extra time workin' on it, but it's still a little strange. Much better than last time, but it's still mm...I'm really not sure, since I'm sure you're a better artist than me right now, mmm...like, I've recently noticed the nose dips down just before the line between the eyebrows, and you have the highlight goin' all the way up, so it gives her nose a strange look...I'd also say the eyebrows are a little thick, and strangely arched? Mmm, and the her right cheeck may be a little bulbous, like, if she were yelling all those muscles would be taught, plus the old thing about straight lines on the face giving more of a feel of tension than rounded lines? Next to last, the eyes kinda scare the hell outta me, bein' all black like that. Mmm, and last but not least, I think maybe her hairline comes down to low? Well, I hope I don't sound like a jerk, and you probably already know all this stuff, but I'm just tryin' to help! Gimme a crit sometime too if ya happen on one of my posts, I'm in a real slump right now...oh, and one more thing I noticed, you could definitely make it look more like his char in the shadow if you add that uhm, like, pony tail on top of his head? Alright! I'll shut up!
Reaching over what we need to get what we don't.
February 29th, 2008 #10
Yep, right on all counts. I'm still adjusting it, and this is good feedback. Man I hate faces.
Any more crits would be appreciated... keep 'em comin'...
February 29th, 2008 #11
Dammn man why ?!! why ?! didn't you wanted a kiss hehehe... (I've got to finish my pic for my duel, but whatever I must do the critics) well, well, well I really think that your WIP was very good, I don't know why you changed the face, and whhyyy her eyes are always blackk ?! Her left hand and the sword were better on your WIP ! There's a little light problem I think. But of course I did all that critics but I love your work ! Try to do more faces even if you hate them , I want to be able to say "I hate this man, he's a killer" hehehe...
February 29th, 2008 #12
It'll get fixed, it's got problems, I know. Just haven't had time yet. And the head changed because, well, it changed.
I'm always up for kissin', but only by wimmin. Not barbarians. No offence.
Damn she's got a small forehead. And a small nose. I'll get it.
February 29th, 2008 #13
here's mine. I'll comment and such later, in a rush right now heh. Hope I at least pose a challenge to ya Corrick