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Thread: Corrick vs. B-Nine -judged
February 29th, 2008 #14
That... is a sweet-ass illustration.
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One question though, shouldn't the end of his sword be coming out of her other side?
February 29th, 2008 #16
Haha hey corrick no problem I didn't wanted to kiss you I love wimmin to
Weellllll and B-Nine very very nice jobbb I think that if corrick don't try to do it better, you'll take his head
But just a little crit the hands of the girl are strange aren't they ?? but whatever Very good job !
February 29th, 2008 #17
Returned with the new and improved. All I have time for I'm afraid, like I said, simple moves. B-Nine, just let me know if you're done and I'll alert the judges.
Thanks to everyone who critiqued. It helps, if only to kick my facial apathy. I'm starting to really like these challenges.
March 1st, 2008 #18
yeah, I'm done with it as far as the challenge goes. I may tweak a few things here and there later on if I decided I want to stash it in my portfolio.
Quick question, do you think a blade poking through the other side makes it better? I assumed it was a dagger so it wouldn't penetrate that deep, but if it makes the image better I'm all for it heh.
March 1st, 2008 #19
btw, great re-vision on her face and I really dig the additions of the flowey cloth stuff
March 1st, 2008 #20
well The reason Corrick thought there should be part of the blade sticking out is because it doesn't look like a dagger. Look at the size of that handle! the blade should be huge (well at least longer....) anyways great work both of you guys and remind me not to challenge you for a while
March 1st, 2008 #21
Yeah, it was the handle that threw me. The tang of the blade is longer than the actual blade itself. Not that it does anything to detract from the image, the whole thing is pretty damn cool.
March 1st, 2008 #22
Niiiice. For both of you. Corrick, you've gotta teach me how to paint metal. That chain mail is a fantastic detail. And in your defense, it's hard to make a woman with that facial expression really attractive
B-nine, great colors. Especially how you handled the shadows, and I was surprised when I scrolled over and saw the addition of him walking away. Awesome sense of motion in yours.
Sweet work guys.
March 1st, 2008 #23
thought I'd update this with the tweaks I did so I can stash it in the portfolio. Changed some of the design of Corrick's character because alot of the angles on those shapes are awkward and difficult to make look cool heh.
March 2nd, 2008 #24
Awkward and difficult to make c–– hey, wait a minute!
They are not. Nice update.
March 2nd, 2008 #25Infinity Engine
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Yeah, for real Corrick, what's the secret to makin' metal look so thick and dull? (in a good way)
Reaching over what we need to get what we don't.
March 2nd, 2008 #26