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    A silly doodle in need of Critique (NSFW and Nudity) New unrelated Sketch included

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    So yeah, this is kind of silly, but what the heck.
    Before anybody goes on thinking, "he swings that way?", the answer is no rofl

    You see, i got my new Wacom tablet today (and omg it's really awesome!), and so i wanted to show it to my pals. They didn't even know i was into drawing and stuff.

    So yeah, basically they wanted me to draw a massive, well, penis.

    Anyways, as i was drawing, i became hooked. What started as a simple doodle became rather nifty drawing after some time.
    So then i thought: "why, this looks so reasonable, that i think I'll go on and see what the CA's has to say about it"

    Anyways, you can decide for your selfs. If it's offensive or if it in any way goes against the rules, don't hesitate to report it.

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    I've seen bigger...

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    I've used bigger...

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    looks too flacid for an ejaculating penis

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    You need to do more life drawing.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Elwell View Post
    You need to do more life drawing.
    I agree.

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    Elwell, that's great!
    and Martios, Hopefully after this, you'll start making better use of the new Wacom.
    Anyhow, veins too bright and protruding too much.

    More work at Kidawa.com

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    Real mature dude...REAL fuckin mature. I agree with the above, make better use of your tablet. Keep the dicks to yourself, there's a difference between art and perversion

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    There's nothing wrong with painting penises.

    But yes, this could use some more rendering love. You've put a lot of time and effort in the veins and hair, but the basic shape of the penis itself looks very flat, almost as if it had been squashed on a scanner. I'd say it would help to work on your basic shape first, and then have fun with all the skin textures and whatnot.

    The smudge tool is extremely unconvincing in the more tangled, thick parts of the hair.

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    mur? lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by jmorris View Post
    Real mature dude...REAL fuckin mature. I agree with the above, make better use of your tablet. Keep the dicks to yourself, there's a difference between art and perversion
    What's perverse about it? It's not the most aesthetically pleasing image, it's probably a tad too pornographic, but "perversion"?

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    heh...

    so much warnings and such yet...

    the thumbnail in the forum thread list is the main image itself.

    the image saying "contains nudity" loaded aaafter the censored image letting you see the image first anyway.

    sorry my sense of humor must be weird but I found that thought rather amusing...

    I am just a newb trying my best.
    Shoo! Stop laughing!
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    I know

    It was my intention that the warning pic should be the thumbnail.

    I totally understand your sense of humor, since i laughed pretty hard at it myself XD

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    Fixed the thumbnail.


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    thank you

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    why isit cumming? lol if your going to draw a life like penis there should be a reason for it comming, it looks a bit stumpy to b a boner also. x

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    i dunno why it's cumming. My dude drew that out of sheer "fun"

    Well anyways, it's not like i was super serious about this. started out as a silly joke then i got more into it as i saw that i could do new exiting things with my wacom.

    Anyways, i would like to thank those who commented. i did not expect any comments at all, except a few "omg grooos how old are you dude seriously"

    I'll try to do more life drawing Elvell, since i know it'll do me good.

    I know this is a cheap trick and all, but i did another random doodl today (no not another penis), and since this post gets way more hits than any other i've posted so far on this forum i'll post it in this one. Just a thumbnail tho.


    about the sketch. I was thinking something like... a cave, and some fish..
    uhm.. well the guy gets bitten by a small fish and looks on it harshly. And then in the background we see a waaay larger fish, readying to swallow him whole or something like that. So far i've only sketched out the dude.

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