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    Well, WoW was offering a week of free playing time again...
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    Yeah, I just wish I had a Riding Turtle...

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    My inability to paint (at all) or draw people has been something that I've been avoiding thinking about.
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    It’s a garter snake hydra, very loosely based/inspired by Gustave Moreau’s “Hercules and the Hydra”.
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    An icon for my friend who goes around the web as different version of "finch".
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    And another birthday image for an online pal
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    We had a movement croquis. It was weird. It didn't produce much good looking stuff, but studying the movement and scribbling them down was interesting.
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    Some very fun drawing going on throughout this thread!

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    Quote Originally Posted by TinyBird View Post
    none of the tutorials actually show how you can choose just the plane, without needing to select all the vertices. If there's no way to do that, then what the hell, who designs something like that?!
    You mean these buttons?

    TinyBird's sketches - only critiques please, no compliments

    Don't quit on Blender. It's awesome. Even though I must admit it's excruciating to learn at first.

    But also remember not to get TOO inspired into Blender so that you would quit drawing. THAT would suck big time.

    Best Blender tutorial sites in my opinion:
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    Some trade stuff
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    Also trying to re-draw this old design
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    Wow, so much great work and creativity in your sb!
    I just love the sketches, the animals, the figures, the cartoons, all of it!
    Keep up, you’re great!

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    Quote Originally Posted by maxon View Post
    You mean these buttons?
    HOLY CRAP
    (Sorry, I don't know why I didn't see this comment when I posted my previous batch)
    And no worries, I won't get too sucked into Blender, I didn't really get into 3DsMax either and I can (well, could) actually use that. But now I have some things to test and tutorials to watch next weekend, definitely, so thanks!

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    I just love your little creature concepts! wonderful studies too~keep it up!

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    Did you crop the dragon sketch or draw within that alloted space?

    The tube hanging off his neck (making the u-shape) looks like its accommodating the edge of the page, the angle makes it appear as if its actually leaning stiffly towards the viewer. On that subject, what is it actually? the tube I mean, at first I thought it was possibly part of a bridle, but it appears to be coming out of the beast itself?

    I know its just a sketch, but thought I'd mention it.

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    Really like the creatures in here man very creative but very coherent

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    man your cartonic stuff look terribly awesome i really like it , specially the animals part (the happy one ), it would be nice if you keeped working on that part of your art .
    i would be glad if you give me a visit to my portfolio and tell me what you think about my art, i do only environments so don't expect to see stuff like yours
    keep the good stuff coming

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    Quote Originally Posted by Star Eater View Post
    Did you crop the dragon sketch or draw within that alloted space?
    The tube hanging off his neck (making the u-shape) looks like its accommodating the edge of the page, the angle makes it appear as if its actually leaning stiffly towards the viewer. On that subject, what is it actually? the tube I mean, at first I thought it was possibly part of a bridle, but it appears to be coming out of the beast itself?
    I just drew on that shape (that's be screengrab aspect ratio) and yeah it definitely is leaning. I have that problem quite often (so reminding me of it definitely is a good thing) and I have heard that drawing with your non-main had usually helps to that so I definitely should do that more... And it's just a pretty random tube or vein with no real purpose, much like the stitches in the creature. I used to draw stuff like that a lot more back in the day (which is why I don't really draw them anymore).

    Quote Originally Posted by bdouah View Post
    i would be glad if you give me a visit to my portfolio and tell me what you think about my art, i do only environments so don't expect to see stuff like yours
    Well, I don't know how much I can say since I draw like zero environments myself, but I'll promise to take a look and comment about it to your sketchbook at some point!

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    Quote Originally Posted by TinyBird View Post
    I just drew on that shape (that's be screengrab aspect ratio) and yeah it definitely is leaning. I have that problem quite often (so reminding me of it definitely is a good thing) and I have heard that drawing with your non-main had usually helps to that so I definitely should do that more... And it's just a pretty random tube or vein with no real purpose, much like the stitches in the creature. I used to draw stuff like that a lot more back in the day (which is why I don't really draw them anymore).
    I do the same thing, that's why I asked. It's been in the back of my mind ever since I watch Mccaigs videos. He mentions it quite often, watching him draw with pencils is interesting if he's going near the edge of the page, he just puts another piece of paper under it and carries on drawing right onto the new page. He brings' it up time and time again about not allowing the page to control the drawing.

    At least with digital, you can expand the canvas...but conversely that started another problem for me...when do you say enough is enough? I've found myself expanding my canvas far more than what I originally intended, I guess the solution then is to adjust the ratio of the line/image itself...bad habits.

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    This ended up going to the complete opposite direction I intended and I don't like it. Several hours wasted.
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    Lovely horse study.

    As for the colour image, I feel your frustration, strong contrasting lighting against a dark background can work so well most times, but occasionally it up and turns on us.

    I think there are too many varied colours on the horse and rider, the strong highlight only adds to the problem creating a serious distraction for the viewer. Instead of suggesting and indicating form, my eyes are travelling from one small area of the characters to the next, piecing it all together individually. The orange against the green/blue sky is particularly harsh.

    I think its an interesting idea though, would be a pity to waste it, especially with that background. Given anythought to repainting the horse and rider in more muted tunes, such as a tighter palette and chucking the reds and greys out entirely? I don't think enough of the surrounding colours are being reflected on the armour.

    Just my opinion though.

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    mmm... very interesting, guess I sould follow this thread... just in case

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    Quote Originally Posted by Star Eater View Post
    Given anythought to repainting the horse and rider in more muted tunes, such as a tighter palette and chucking the reds and greys out entirely? I don't think enough of the surrounding colours are being reflected on the armour.
    Yeah, this was originally supposed to be painted and in a much tighter, bluer and natural colourscheme, so I definitely will try re-doing the whole image to fit what I originally wanted to do. And like, actually design the armor beforehand. I just have a really bad habit of just going what feels good at that point (like, just inking this image, I always like that so I did it despite what I intended) >:V

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