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    !- MVerehin SKETCHBOOK. Criticize my sketches please. New week- new sketches.-!

    Greetings people!
    Here I shall spread works, which has drawn for a week.
    I wait for responses and critiques...
    Continue to draw...

    !- MVerehin SKETCHBOOK. Criticize my sketches please. New week- new sketches.-!!- MVerehin SKETCHBOOK. Criticize my sketches please. New week- new sketches.-!

    !- MVerehin SKETCHBOOK. Criticize my sketches please. New week- new sketches.-!!- MVerehin SKETCHBOOK. Criticize my sketches please. New week- new sketches.-!

    !- MVerehin SKETCHBOOK. Criticize my sketches please. New week- new sketches.-!

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    Cool stuff! I like the piggy-fant!

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    Thanks. New stuff on Sunday...

    here old work (ArtRage)

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    hey you're very good

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    awesome sketches.. and the apples are really cool to.. keep it up

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    Cool stuff, not really to crit now.
    Hope to see more artwork soon.
    Cheers,

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    Thanks for comments guys.
    Before I share out new sketches, look on my WIP

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    Hey verhin thats an excellent use of imagination on the first post, id like to see some more of that as for critiqing goes, work on your linework, try experimenting with diferent thicknesses of pencils, ill keep checking out this thread to see how you progressing, hope this helps



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    New stuff

    thanks l0stinth0ughts, I really should work above many aspects of mine art, so I try to improve...

    works of new week

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    i like it man, just keep them coming, but i would like to see one whole piece if its not too much to ask. all i see are random parts, kinda throws off what your really trying to show. but good work man, they seem to flow pretty good, but it just gets cut off somewhere in the mist. Keep up the good work mate



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    l0stinth0ughts that, I here spread, it only training. I would like to draw something more finished, but while I feel insufficiently confidently. I wish to improve anatomy, design and so on and only then to do finished works...

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    good point, then do as you will, if thats your way of learning something. all i was asking is to see a whole piece that way i could see some of your weaknesses and some of your strengths, but ill keep giving you comments. until i see a finish one lol.



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    Cool ideas you have Ver, line weight would add a lot to these i think, but none the less cool work so far, keep sharing.. ;-)

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    Thanks guys, I really glad to receive yours comments..

    Here is digital try

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    Verehin, my only critique after looking at whats on this thread would be that i think in your digital pieces, i think your lights could be pushed more - the darks are turned up, but i'm not finding a difinitive hi-light, also i think the details could be pushed a bit as well, maybe adding some differing textures to the underside of this creatures belly (?) and adding that second arm (if there is one) i think the little black sketch on the bottom left is really good maybe incorporating more of those ideas into the bigger piece would help?

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    Movenski thanks for advice, I shall consider your remarks..

    new piece -

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    hey man looking good so far, i like the ribcage being spread open and the birds flying out. i wanna see some more of that..



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    Again thanks for comments l0stinth0ughts, soon I shall lay out new works come back...

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    I think, if I'm reading the last sketch well, his right arm should be lower. And if that's a nipple above his bicep.. it would be weirdass.

    I'm guessin there's not enough construction.. but I don't know. Really like that last B/W. Good job. Keep up the updating..

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    haha. NO this is not nipple on biceps, this simply juice drop

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    New character. The first girl which I have drawn in a life. Estimate....

    New one tomorrow, сome...

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    Apples.. man... thosse apples just kick ass..

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    really good concepts you have here man. really like the last one. and the eleph-pig. i'd suggest using more weighted line, and also put a bit more emphasis on contrast, it will help give more depth and make the image stand out more. i'd really like to see more digital works from you as well. keep it up man.

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    Update! Any thought?

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    hey verehin, i like the new updates.
    i like the first one too the girl character, "looks down" oo00o a landing strip, whoa! yea i like it.
    keep up the new post man, your not only helping yourself but you also your helping me out create new interesting ideas that i can work with. thanks! best of luck man



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    A BIG thanks!!!
    Wow, l0stinth0ughts, I really glad to hear this.
    I pleased if my sketchbook can be useful for people.
    Always welcome.....

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    nice work mate, like the one with small flyes. is he trapped in spider web or is it an evovling cocon?

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    this two stages of the growing of the character, first- she princess capable to move, second- she queen postponing cocoons.

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