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February 11th, 2008 #1
I'm designing a label for a beer called GOG, forgot what kind of beer, but here is what i got so far, i don't do much illustration work, so i could use all and any tips, hints, suggestions.. PLEASE!!!!! he wanted a giant holding a staff and a mug of beer with antlers. plz help me guys. let me know of any problems and cant see.. just a sketch so far... thanks.
Last edited by michaeljared; June 16th, 2009 at 08:02 PM. Reason: need new help
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Do you mean to be in the Critique Center with these? This seems like a lovely start to a sketchbook...
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February 12th, 2008 #3
Yeah man, I really have nothing to say about these other than great markmaking and values. You don't need us, but I'd love to see more!
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February 12th, 2008 #5
Wha-?? Those are excellent, I'd definately love to see more.
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These ARE good and they're great for sketchbook material. But while you have the general shapes of hands down, it looks like you skimp out of drawing em' in a lot of these and you don't put more detail down than a 'mitten' feel to them. I'd like to see more hands in general, even if it's just mittens.
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February 12th, 2008 #7
Keep struggling, it's paying off. Where/with who are you studying?
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February 12th, 2008 #8
Awesome, I want more details though. Show me more.
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holy cow! he did it. nice stuff mike! post some of your landscapes..
February 22nd, 2008 #10
moving to http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?p=1652567#post1652567
I figured i'd put all my stuff in another sketchbook thread. with some landscapes
February 23rd, 2008 #11
I love how you focus mainly on the main traits and the shadows and highlights. You don't get too cought up in details, and the lighting is really nice! My favourites are the first picture and the fifth picture.
June 16th, 2009 #12
Help me plz on first post...
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June 16th, 2009 #13
Try to work in more contrapposto that would help, his pose seems a little tense for a relaxed greeting.
Try the pose your self in front of a mirror - you'll see what I mean.
not perfect but hopefully helpful
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