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    Birdcage

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    Last edited by -lanih; February 11th, 2008 at 06:07 PM. Reason: too big


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    Amazing attention to detail and lovely colours, but your anatomy and (specially) your perspective need more work. Parallel lines should converge towards single point in the horizon. The birdcage looks like it occupies the same space as the couch.

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    It looks to me like she is sitting somewhere higher than the couch cushion... or like she is slowly sliding off the couch. Also, maybe you could show where her right leg is with some kind of fold in the fabric... just looks kind of flat right now.

    I still think it looks beautiful and it shows that you worked on it ^^

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    yeah i can see what you mean, with all those points. Thanks for the tips : )

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