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    Hi all. In the aim of recovering from my LMS defeat (respect to alxcote),
    I decided to paint this.
    Hope you like


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    Jon, good boy: you are magnificient.
    It is impressive how far you improved lately. So much impressive that is scarry.
    Minor crit: something bother me with her right leg proportion, specially on the lower part, if I compare with the overall body. Also: the "plit" under the knee is a tad "too generous" for me.
    Aside that, no crits, I love the atmosphear of it, the pink fume, renders [you improved so fast on taht point ] and graphic treatment on the hairs/batwings.
    Take care, Jony-boy !
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    Nice rendering. The perspective is a bit confusing though.

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    Nice work, Jon!! Great smokey effect.
    Perspective may need a couple minutes of tweaking, but otherwise great stuff. It's cool to see something non sci fi from you

    See you in the TD, bitch.

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    So, where's this bus she's meant to be sucking? Sounds kinky. Anything goes these days though, right? I'm such a prude!

    Nice pikcher mate

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    Quote Originally Posted by Robert.B View Post
    Nice rendering. The perspective is a bit confusing though.
    I saw that as well, but I took it as intentionally distorted ... ? Like those wonderful Jon Forster illos. Way to make pink and purple work for you Jon, and a great composition. Not too big a fan of the framing and text, but I can't think of a better way to handle it right now so don't take that crit too seriously .

    cheers!

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    great work mate, i love the colours and detailing you have achieved in this piece

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    The tattoo work on her is sweet! Nice render!



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