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February 8th, 2008 #1
Alizel's scribblebook- FEAR cyberpunk concepts
I am currently sketching alot of concept designs and characters for an ongoing cyberpunk comic project. I think it would help massively if I could get critique on how everything looks and whatever I can do to make my comic better.
I will also be posting my penciled pages and I would like to get everyones feedback on how I should go about finalizing everything, including how much should I do in color, perspectives, etc.
I'll start posting with the earliest "brainstorming" work.
Thanks for any feedback I can get
Last edited by Alizel; February 8th, 2008 at 05:28 AM.
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February 8th, 2008 #3
vehicular concept sketches, plus a few stoyboarded scenery sketches
February 8th, 2008 #4
February 9th, 2008 #5
Here are some FEAR pages that I've completed penciling
These are all from the opening chapter, hopefully I'd like some suggestions on how to color them.
February 9th, 2008 #6
February 9th, 2008 #7
woh! Crazy good line art Alizel!
My sketchbooks. Don't be nice. Be honest.
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February 9th, 2008 #8
great pieces. your attention to detail is insane. love them all.
but those vehicles just made my day. love the flying bikes, if that's what they are. keep us updated.
February 9th, 2008 #9
You make me cry...
February 10th, 2008 #10
Those are amazing! I love them!
February 10th, 2008 #11
Lots of detail and I also like the pospective drawing of your Sequentual Art . Keep it up*~
February 10th, 2008 #12Registered User
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love the art and i would buy the comic
Last edited by vann12; February 10th, 2008 at 04:34 AM.My sketchbook
February 10th, 2008 #13
Ditto, Comic looks amazing Attention to detail is supurb, You can really see the maddness of motion in some of the action shots!
February 10th, 2008 #14
wow,Amazing.please post in higher resolution,Thank you.
Need your critique
February 10th, 2008 #15I can fly!
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The only thing that really bugs me are the female breasts.. they look like big spheres, like balloons tucked under their clothes.
They're not spheres, but more like sacks of water 0_o (unless they're plastic..)
"Sadly, most artists prefer to give the elite their attention."
February 10th, 2008 #16
And if they're plastic they're... BIG SPHERES... MMM ... BIG SPHERES! We (most men) like perky breasts and not sagging sacks of water, keep it up!
Great stuff, hard to critique when it's so good. 5 stars from me.
February 10th, 2008 #17
I wish you could upload bigger versions of your work!
what pencil do you use?
your lines are so clean!!!!
you´re the ultimate!!!
nothing special....sadly....but I hope someday^^
when you want to mentor someone, you may want to come here
February 10th, 2008 #18
February 10th, 2008 #19
Awesome stuff. I really like your anime style art.
February 11th, 2008 #20
awesome work i love your style
"the LORD said unto him, Therefore whosoever slayeth Cain, vengeance shall be taken on him sevenfold.And the LORD set a mark upon Cain, lest any finding him should kill him. And Cain went out from the presence of the LORD, and dwelt in the land of Nod, on the east of Eden." GENESIS 4:19
March 24th, 2008 #21
Storyboarding concept work
Here are some scans of a storyboarding assignment I had
We were given a script from an old '70s scifi movie and we got to redesign all the concepts, characters, and some shots
I mainly had trouble with the clouds in the first scene....
(The movie was titled "Logan's Run" if anyones interested)
March 24th, 2008 #22
Oh man, you got my favorite stuff here....hot chicks. And the detail of each piece of work is just amazing!!! I love your anime style as well, nice combination with your concept design. The only thing I am not comfortable with is the vehicle design. The feasibility looks doesn't work for me, hope you don't mind. The rest are excellent, 5 star from me!!!!
April 20th, 2008 #23
2AM Coffeeshop sketches
We all know we love to do this... because it's just such a great way to loosen up, forget about the tedious gainormous paintings and vent out.
I haven't done much sketching for awhile.
here's some random stuff I did sitting around a coffeshop at about 2am.
April 20th, 2008 #24
As a person who has never been able to do a clean image in his life, I have a huge amount of respect towards you.
These are great, or should I say Excellent.
April 20th, 2008 #25Registered User
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Wow... just wow
Your attention to detail is incredible... how long does it typically take you to get one of these finished?
May 18th, 2008 #26
Giving Out BonesEXCELLENT
May 18th, 2008 #27
Those are some really wicked line work and amount of details. I would love to see them painted or colored too.
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