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    Alizel's scribblebook- FEAR cyberpunk concepts

    Hey guys!
    I am currently sketching alot of concept designs and characters for an ongoing cyberpunk comic project. I think it would help massively if I could get critique on how everything looks and whatever I can do to make my comic better.
    I will also be posting my penciled pages and I would like to get everyones feedback on how I should go about finalizing everything, including how much should I do in color, perspectives, etc.

    I'll start posting with the earliest "brainstorming" work.
    Thanks for any feedback I can get
    Last edited by Alizel; February 8th, 2008 at 05:28 AM.


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    Even though I don't like manga that very much I can think that this is pretty good.
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    Vehicular concepts

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    vehicular concept sketches, plus a few stoyboarded scenery sketches

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    Cyberpunk sonds good

    I really like your drawings
    Forgive me my bad english

    my sketchbook and my homepage

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    Penciled pages

    Here are some FEAR pages that I've completed penciling
    These are all from the opening chapter, hopefully I'd like some suggestions on how to color them.

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    woh! Crazy good line art Alizel!
    My sketchbooks. Don't be nice. Be honest.

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    great pieces. your attention to detail is insane. love them all.
    but those vehicles just made my day. love the flying bikes, if that's what they are. keep us updated.

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    You make me cry...


    just wow!

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    Those are amazing! I love them!

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    Lots of detail and I also like the pospective drawing of your Sequentual Art . Keep it up*~

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    love the art and i would buy the comic
    Last edited by vann12; February 10th, 2008 at 04:34 AM.

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    Ditto, Comic looks amazing Attention to detail is supurb, You can really see the maddness of motion in some of the action shots!

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    wow,Amazing.please post in higher resolution,Thank you.
    Need your critique
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    The only thing that really bugs me are the female breasts.. they look like big spheres, like balloons tucked under their clothes.
    They're not spheres, but more like sacks of water 0_o (unless they're plastic..)
    "Sadly, most artists prefer to give the elite their attention."

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