I am currently sketching alot of concept designs and characters for an ongoing cyberpunk comic project. I think it would help massively if I could get critique on how everything looks and whatever I can do to make my comic better.
I will also be posting my penciled pages and I would like to get everyones feedback on how I should go about finalizing everything, including how much should I do in color, perspectives, etc.
I'll start posting with the earliest "brainstorming" work.
Thanks for any feedback I can get
Last edited by Alizel; February 8th, 2008 at 04:28 AM.
vehicular concept sketches, plus a few stoyboarded scenery sketches
Here are some FEAR pages that I've completed penciling
These are all from the opening chapter, hopefully I'd like some suggestions on how to color them.
woh! Crazy good line art Alizel!
My sketchbooks. Don't be nice. Be honest.
My main Sketchbook!
great pieces. your attention to detail is insane. love them all.
but those vehicles just made my day. love the flying bikes, if that's what they are. keep us updated.
You make me cry...
Those are amazing! I love them!
Lots of detail and I also like the pospective drawing of your Sequentual Art . Keep it up*~
love the art and i would buy the comic
Last edited by vann12; February 10th, 2008 at 03:34 AM.
Ditto, Comic looks amazing Attention to detail is supurb, You can really see the maddness of motion in some of the action shots!
wow,Amazing.please post in higher resolution,Thank you.
Need your critique
The only thing that really bugs me are the female breasts.. they look like big spheres, like balloons tucked under their clothes.
They're not spheres, but more like sacks of water 0_o (unless they're plastic..)
"Sadly, most artists prefer to give the elite their attention."
And if they're plastic they're... BIG SPHERES... MMM ... BIG SPHERES! We (most men) like perky breasts and not sagging sacks of water, keep it up!
Great stuff, hard to critique when it's so good. 5 stars from me.
I wish you could upload bigger versions of your work!
what pencil do you use?
your lines are so clean!!!!
you´re the ultimate!!!
nothing special....sadly....but I hope someday^^
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awesome work i love your style
"the LORD said unto him, Therefore whosoever slayeth Cain, vengeance shall be taken on him sevenfold.And the LORD set a mark upon Cain, lest any finding him should kill him. And Cain went out from the presence of the LORD, and dwelt in the land of Nod, on the east of Eden." GENESIS 4:19
Here are some scans of a storyboarding assignment I had
We were given a script from an old '70s scifi movie and we got to redesign all the concepts, characters, and some shots
I mainly had trouble with the clouds in the first scene....
(The movie was titled "Logan's Run" if anyones interested)
Oh man, you got my favorite stuff here....hot chicks. And the detail of each piece of work is just amazing!!! I love your anime style as well, nice combination with your concept design. The only thing I am not comfortable with is the vehicle design. The feasibility looks doesn't work for me, hope you don't mind. The rest are excellent, 5 star from me!!!!
We all know we love to do this... because it's just such a great way to loosen up, forget about the tedious gainormous paintings and vent out.
I haven't done much sketching for awhile.
here's some random stuff I did sitting around a coffeshop at about 2am.
As a person who has never been able to do a clean image in his life, I have a huge amount of respect towards you.
These are great, or should I say Excellent.
Wow... just wow
Your attention to detail is incredible... how long does it typically take you to get one of these finished?
Those are some really wicked line work and amount of details. I would love to see them painted or colored too.
Make a sketchbook happy, feed it a tip to improve!