Sketchbook: Pedram's SKETCHBOOK

Join the #1 Art Workshop - LevelUpJoin Premium Art Workshop
Page 1 of 2 1 2 LastLast
Results 1 to 30 of 37
  1. #1
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Posts
    47
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  


  2. Hide this ad by registering as a member
  3. #2
    Join Date
    Jul 2005
    Posts
    173
    Thanks
    23
    Thanked 18 Times in 18 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  4. #3
    Join Date
    Jul 2006
    Location
    Munich
    Posts
    1,354
    Thanks
    338
    Thanked 420 Times in 249 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    right on dude




    cheers

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  5. #4
    Join Date
    Dec 2005
    Location
    Malaysia
    Posts
    575
    Thanks
    149
    Thanked 120 Times in 72 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    There is no image showing. Use the Manage Attachments to attach your pic

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  6. #5
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Posts
    47
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0

    1st sketch.

    ok,this is my last works ,i think its still not completed,but az you now these are sketchs! glad to see your comments.

    ,i will update my sketchs every week.hope you like that noob works!

    Attached Images Attached Images      
    Last edited by pedram; June 15th, 2008 at 02:49 AM. Reason: Resizing sketchs
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  7. #6
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Posts
    47
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0

    update.

    My earlier work.
    and my concept for EA games(TIBERIUM WARS NOD ELITE Sniper).
    dont forgat crids.

    Attached Images Attached Images    
    Last edited by pedram; February 7th, 2008 at 02:29 PM.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  8. #7
    Join Date
    Nov 2007
    Location
    England
    Posts
    44
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    a couple things ive noticed first of the heads of your characters look to small in comparison with the rest of the body, and also the torso looks to big compared to the rest of the body, im sure other people will say pretty much the same thing, get some anatomy books or do some life drawing classes they both have helped me become better in only a few months ive been doing them so those are my opinions.

    "the LORD said unto him, Therefore whosoever slayeth Cain, vengeance shall be taken on him sevenfold.And the LORD set a mark upon Cain, lest any finding him should kill him. And Cain went out from the presence of the LORD, and dwelt in the land of Nod, on the east of Eden." GENESIS 4:19
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  9. #8
    Join Date
    Dec 2005
    Location
    Malaysia
    Posts
    575
    Thanks
    149
    Thanked 120 Times in 72 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    Some nice design.
    For now, i think you should stop drawing character from imagination and do some anatomy studies. Some character is off balance. Others i agreed with theelusiveyoda.
    If you really want to do from imagination, find some reference for the part you dont know how to draw. This will make you character look more believable.

    Keep on posting and happy drawing

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  10. #9
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Posts
    47
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    thanks for your advices,about heads as you can see there are armor pieces on shoulders of no1 & no2's right arm and specialy my earlier work that you can see a bunch of armors that he s lifting on his chest area and heavy one on his shoulders(cause they are warrior characters)! and these are not only torsos.another reason is too big muscle's az you know SO THE HEAD will looking small(as you can see in real life too).
    next time i will send another type of characters,with better anatomys and draw armors better for better realize
    thanks for your useful advices and comments guys.keep it going

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  11. #10
    Join Date
    Nov 2007
    Location
    England
    Posts
    44
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    pedram its not that were trying to put you down or anything its just that cristism helps people improve i know what it feels like people saying some of your best work still needs work but in the end you realise what they say is (most of the time) right and if you follow others advise you improve over time

    "the LORD said unto him, Therefore whosoever slayeth Cain, vengeance shall be taken on him sevenfold.And the LORD set a mark upon Cain, lest any finding him should kill him. And Cain went out from the presence of the LORD, and dwelt in the land of Nod, on the east of Eden." GENESIS 4:19
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  12. #11
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Posts
    47
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    hey,these are only sketchs,and i dont think that you are going to put me down my friend.i just only discribed my sketchs.BTW your advices about Cheracters head was too useful that make me think about that.for next time i will send more detailed sketchs.thanks

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  13. #12
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Posts
    47
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    next time my earlier anatomy works.

    Attached Images Attached Images  
    Last edited by pedram; February 10th, 2008 at 07:18 AM.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  14. #13
    Join Date
    Nov 2007
    Location
    England
    Posts
    44
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    ok the head looks better but a couple of things the arms are way to short in comparison to the rest of the body as well as the hands and also the torso is to small in comparisson to the the legs

    "the LORD said unto him, Therefore whosoever slayeth Cain, vengeance shall be taken on him sevenfold.And the LORD set a mark upon Cain, lest any finding him should kill him. And Cain went out from the presence of the LORD, and dwelt in the land of Nod, on the east of Eden." GENESIS 4:19
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  15. #14
    Join Date
    Dec 2005
    Location
    Malaysia
    Posts
    575
    Thanks
    149
    Thanked 120 Times in 72 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    Did a paint over, hope you dont mine.
    I'm not a pro, so i cant said that is 100% correct.
    Other i agreed with above. sorry for the crappy paint over

    Attached Images Attached Images  
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  16. #15
    Join Date
    Nov 2007
    Location
    England
    Posts
    44
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    i was just about to a paint over but you beat me to it yinteck

    "the LORD said unto him, Therefore whosoever slayeth Cain, vengeance shall be taken on him sevenfold.And the LORD set a mark upon Cain, lest any finding him should kill him. And Cain went out from the presence of the LORD, and dwelt in the land of Nod, on the east of Eden." GENESIS 4:19
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  17. #16
    Join Date
    Jul 2007
    Location
    Dallas, TX
    Posts
    278
    Thanks
    114
    Thanked 197 Times in 100 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    You have surprisingly clean and flowing lines.

    Alright, now to the crit.

    ANATOMY. You must learn it. I would advise you take an exodus away from your routine of fantasy art and start studying from life, and analyzing what your eyes see, not what your mind perceives to be correct. What your problem is, when you start to draw, your mind is pulling information on the subject matter, and if that information is erroneous or inaccurate, then your drawing will likewise be inaccurate.

    This is why it is very important that you do studies, and draw from life. When you draw from life, you start to develop muscle memory and sense of accurate proportion. This is because your eyes, hand, and brain are working in tandem to reproduce a 3 dimensional object 2 dimensionally. Practicing in this way develops the muscle memory I was talking about: i.e. your eyes will know what looks proportional and accurate, your brain will be providing the information for the subject matter and your hand will be able to generate the information while being kept in check by the eyes. When you draw straight from your imagination with no reference images or study models, the minds perception of an object can become distorted very easily. It is especially essential that you work from reference because you do not yet have the proportional, anatomical awareness to illustrate strictly from imagination.

    I made some quick paintovers to demonstrate some of the anatomical inaccuracies.

    Name:  Crit1.jpg
Views: 434
Size:  300.0 KB

    Name:  Crit 2.jpg
Views: 757
Size:  241.3 KB

    Start working on drawing from reference, or better yet, pick up Bridgman's Complete Guide to Drawing from Life. If you work at improving your working knowledge of anatomy, you'll find your fantasy and fiction work will improve greatly.

    Good luck, and if you have any more questions, don't be afraid to ask.

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  18. #17
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Posts
    47
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0

    UpDATE:anatomy study's...

    iam back again...and finally i moved up my lazy ass & deside to upload some anatomy studys,waiting for your crits
    catain masses of body,balance&simple figures,i will upload some betters later

    Attached Images Attached Images                  
    Last edited by pedram; May 23rd, 2008 at 03:07 PM.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  19. #18
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Posts
    47
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0

    work on anatomy

    working simple character on correct anatomy...just for training.

    Attached Images Attached Images  
    Last edited by pedram; May 23rd, 2008 at 03:09 PM.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  20. #19
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Posts
    47
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0

    Update.

    my last work in progress,back to the character's!!finally first work after some anatomy's.

    Attached Images Attached Images          
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  21. #20
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Posts
    47
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0

    final update

    and final update'son that sketch


    Attached Images Attached Images      
    Last edited by pedram; May 23rd, 2008 at 03:47 PM.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  22. #21
    Join Date
    Jul 2007
    Posts
    198
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 19 Times in 18 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    Hey Pedram,
    i think it's better to work on proportion before digging into the anatomy stuff,for example your heads are really smaller than usual and your bodies are fat.find one of the Loomis' books and try to understand the human proportion first.
    cu

    Need your critique
    My Sketchbook
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  23. #22
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Posts
    47
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    thanks hmanafi these are from bridgeman anatomys & iam trying to scaling up my head's with this book,i will keep'in that.

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  24. #23
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Posts
    47
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0

    Digital Funwork

    iam not proffesional on rendering with photoshop & its my first work with that...

    Attached Images Attached Images  
    Last edited by pedram; May 24th, 2008 at 05:36 AM.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  25. #24
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Posts
    47
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0

    another ps work

    not complete..

    Attached Images Attached Images  
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  26. #25
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Posts
    47
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0

    Update.

    working on face proportation...i need some refrences for that.

    Attached Images Attached Images  
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  27. #26
    Join Date
    May 2005
    Location
    Sofia, Bulgaria
    Posts
    472
    Thanks
    2
    Thanked 294 Times in 137 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    Heya, nice sketchbook you`ve got going here. keep up the studies they are absolutely crutial. Maybe try here http://www.movieweb.com/ and draw the actors :]

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  28. #27
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Posts
    47
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    Thanks mattinian,i have a long way to be a pro like you dude :]...i will try & keep that it in my mind.

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  29. #28
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Posts
    47
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0

    sketchy:)

    another concept for tiberium warslet me introducing her,one of the best gdi zocom warriors:sgt leona banks(C)..created by me and now my favorite

    Attached Images Attached Images  
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  30. #29
    Join Date
    Dec 2005
    Location
    Malaysia
    Posts
    575
    Thanks
    149
    Thanked 120 Times in 72 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    Always draw the nude figure first to avoid error like the leg ( knee Part ) The armor doest cover the leg correctly. Her leg is also to short compare to her torso. Keep Posting !

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  31. #30
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Posts
    47
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    with all stage's & node figure's...not completed (oopss!!sorry for incurrect numbers)

    next is my previous work..not detailed az my last work!arthas from WoW..

    Attached Images Attached Images  
    Last edited by pedram; February 25th, 2009 at 12:49 AM.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

Page 1 of 2 1 2 LastLast

Members who have read this thread: 0

There are no members to list at the moment.

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
  • 424,149 Artists
  • 3,599,276 Artist Posts
  • 32,941 Sketchbooks
  • 54 New Art Jobs
Art Workshop Discount Inside
Register

Developed Actively by vBSocial.com
The Art Department
SpringOfSea's Sketchbook