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    Pedram's SKETCHBOOK

    ok at last i dicided to upload my sketchs here,so here we go.hope you like them.
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    right on dude




    cheers
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    1st sketch.

    ok,this is my last works ,i think its still not completed,but az you now these are sketchs! glad to see your comments.

    ,i will update my sketchs every week.hope you like that noob works!
    Last edited by pedram; June 15th, 2008 at 02:49 AM. Reason: Resizing sketchs
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    update.

    My earlier work.
    and my concept for EA games(TIBERIUM WARS NOD ELITE Sniper).
    dont forgat crids.
    Last edited by pedram; February 7th, 2008 at 03:29 PM.
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    a couple things ive noticed first of the heads of your characters look to small in comparison with the rest of the body, and also the torso looks to big compared to the rest of the body, im sure other people will say pretty much the same thing, get some anatomy books or do some life drawing classes they both have helped me become better in only a few months ive been doing them so those are my opinions.
    "the LORD said unto him, Therefore whosoever slayeth Cain, vengeance shall be taken on him sevenfold.And the LORD set a mark upon Cain, lest any finding him should kill him. And Cain went out from the presence of the LORD, and dwelt in the land of Nod, on the east of Eden." GENESIS 4:19
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    Some nice design.
    For now, i think you should stop drawing character from imagination and do some anatomy studies. Some character is off balance. Others i agreed with theelusiveyoda.
    If you really want to do from imagination, find some reference for the part you dont know how to draw. This will make you character look more believable.

    Keep on posting and happy drawing
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    thanks for your advices,about heads as you can see there are armor pieces on shoulders of no1 & no2's right arm and specialy my earlier work that you can see a bunch of armors that he s lifting on his chest area and heavy one on his shoulders(cause they are warrior characters)! and these are not only torsos.another reason is too big muscle's az you know SO THE HEAD will looking small(as you can see in real life too).
    next time i will send another type of characters,with better anatomys and draw armors better for better realize
    thanks for your useful advices and comments guys.keep it going
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    pedram its not that were trying to put you down or anything its just that cristism helps people improve i know what it feels like people saying some of your best work still needs work but in the end you realise what they say is (most of the time) right and if you follow others advise you improve over time
    "the LORD said unto him, Therefore whosoever slayeth Cain, vengeance shall be taken on him sevenfold.And the LORD set a mark upon Cain, lest any finding him should kill him. And Cain went out from the presence of the LORD, and dwelt in the land of Nod, on the east of Eden." GENESIS 4:19
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    hey,these are only sketchs,and i dont think that you are going to put me down my friend.i just only discribed my sketchs.BTW your advices about Cheracters head was too useful that make me think about that.for next time i will send more detailed sketchs.thanks
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    next time my earlier anatomy works.
    Last edited by pedram; February 10th, 2008 at 08:18 AM.
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    ok the head looks better but a couple of things the arms are way to short in comparison to the rest of the body as well as the hands and also the torso is to small in comparisson to the the legs
    "the LORD said unto him, Therefore whosoever slayeth Cain, vengeance shall be taken on him sevenfold.And the LORD set a mark upon Cain, lest any finding him should kill him. And Cain went out from the presence of the LORD, and dwelt in the land of Nod, on the east of Eden." GENESIS 4:19
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