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    Question Shades Portrait

    Part of a project, no values below a 5.

    I realize the finger joints are a little too short/long, keep forgetting to address that...

    Any pointers, redlines, etc would be vastly appreciated. Due tomorrow (along with a tints version I haven't started yet... due to changing my entire project concept), but even beyond that I plan on brushing it up some.

    I'm following pretty closely to a ref, I can provide that as well if needed.

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    Last edited by Saelyra; February 3rd, 2008 at 11:42 PM. Reason: Updated image again
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    looks like a really nice start, keep going

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    Thanks! Updated the image again, done working on it for now- a friend pointed out a few mistakes but I'll have to wait to fix those until after I turn it in Any advice is still appreciated, however! And I'll post the second image once it's at a recognizable state.

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    More contrast would pop it out more, lighter skin tones along his hands/shirt. Try to differentaite it fro mthe background.

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    Yeah, I would make it lighter but those are as bright as I can go within the parameters of this assignment. I might see about changing the curtain color though...

    Last edited by Saelyra; February 4th, 2008 at 07:25 AM. Reason: syntax
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