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    Question sketch for a birthday present - need advise

    Hey people,

    This character is based on stories and jokes me and my friend came up with a while ago. I thought it would be a nice present for him, if I can manage to complete it in the end. anyway. I am quite rubbish at painting so only lines at the moment.

    all c&c welcome

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    i'd say first thing to fix would be the length of the torso. unless that is part of the design, which of course it might be.

    but if not at the moment it is too long.

    Your lines are good, and i like the design. also the pose generally is well concieved.

    i did a paintover. hope you don't mind that. i'm just a bit bored at the moment & can't think of anything of my own to paint.

    i thought it might be helpful.

    - robotnik.

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