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    Looking for crtique

    This seems to be the best page for this sort of thing.

    Well, here's the ref:
    http://cache.eb.com/eb/image?id=66605&rendTypeId=4

    And here's my pic:


    Tear it apart. I need it.

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    Looks good so far!

    Double check that ear, it's much bigger in the referance (when you get older your ears get bigger and sag down alot )

    Also i think his teeth are a little too large and too few. It's making it almost look like a caricature. If you have bigger referance so that you can really see the teeth that would be good.

    Rock on!

    ...my humble and uneducated opinion.

    -Nate
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    Yeah it looks good, but it has that cartoonish feel becouse of his teeth.
    except that its a pretty good start I think.

    Looking for a job!

    Mail me: thr0atcutter@net.hr
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    Keeping what you said in mind, I drew another picture. I feel a little bit better about this one.


    My ref, much like the one from my last picture, was in a textbook. And now I can't find the original Picture on the internet. So, this is the next best thing.


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