you have some beautiful imagery. Wonderful variation in line quality, and your digital painting isn't bad either!
two suggestions however: when rendering in pencil, do amp up the values a bit... it will make the volume of the figure pop out and become more apparent. Also, try to finish the hands and feet... I've noticed that when you draw a figure, you tend to finish the face first, then the body, then the hands and feet first... don't neglect them because they are difficult. I have to brush up on them all the time myself.
good stuff! keep it up!