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    Writers Book! +NUDiTY+ UPDATE 16 november

    Behold, the power of my old timer scanner.. I'm still figuring out the techno stuff so bare with me. Working on an old pIII 650, so dont aspect miracles

    This is the first ever time that I'm posting my stuff here.. So, don't hold back, give my crits, there fore I can improve.

    I have no digitals, only pencils and charcoals..

    BTW, I'm a N00b in this forum

    I will try and update as many times as I can!!

    CRIT ME, Whack me with thou critic stick

    P.s. Changed the title.. the other one sounded retarded :|
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    More scans

    Crit me !!! plz!!!
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    Almost forgot this one

    It was a bet.. A friend of mine said "I'll bet you that you cant draw a girly dragon" Well.. It turned a bit to cute :|

    Anywayz.. I'm drawing because I love it.

    I draw to many times. Although I'm not following any studies for it, I'm trying best. I know, I do not compare to the big boys... but one day... Really.. One day... I will, not that I'm ambitious or anything

    Happy to be here And may the grow of art begin!!!!
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    <depressed> Yeah... I know... I suck </depressed>
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    Im no pro or anything so I cant say anything super critic-like.
    Only problem I found was on your last one. His big toe on his left foot is on the wrong side. =b
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    -weilds crit-stick of doom-

    For the first, the rat-holding girl her arms look too skinny, in my opinion. Also, I feel like her belt throughs her figure off, and it seems like you tried to show her coat being pinched back together by it, but your rendering of this makes it seemed misaligned. I think if you enhanced the fabric fold above the belt and made the adjustment under less dramatic, this would solve it. On the positive side, I like the way her face was done, as well as her garments. The rat, of course, is cute as intended.

    In your next page of sketches, the one that catches my eye most is the side view of the man in the middle, under the monester. Although it could be a concious style choice on your part, his head is too tall and nod widened enough in the back. As the way it is, it gives him character, and a tall slender look, if possibly a bit akward or gangly of limbs (yes, I'm gathering all this from his head, right or wrong =P), but I think if that's the desired effect it's also possible to achieve using a fully-rounded skull. If it's a choice of style, trying it with a more rounded skull if only for comparison purposes, I think is a good idea.

    For your goat anther, I think it would look smoother and less like man+goat if you made his legs longer (which I think he should have anyways in porportion to head-size) and thicker with a more human-flavor blend, it would flow together better. Love the head and the skulls, and the over-all concept.

    That's all for now, I may give some more constructive criticism later on the others, but reguardless keep up the good work, and I hope to see more!

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    quick update
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    Taven : Thanx .. working on a little redraw. Although the girl supposed to be skinny I see where youre getting at... Got a lot of work to do But I'll manage.
    Frankly, the dudes head.. I just gave it a swing. I don't usually draw those heads them way, but it was late, real late. Honestly, I don't really know how to draw goat thingies. This was something like the 3 time I drew such a thing, I'm currently doing horse studies (Other sketch book, a real one, and that is bigger than the one I use to scan with (A4/A3).

    Ekul: OMG!! youre right... I feel like a boob now lol. Thanx will take care to watch the details more closely. What was I thinking....


    Any advise on how to make you're Sketch book look snazzy and cool.. Not sure how really.. Should I add some more studies of the human anatomy, add monsters, more boobs (Hmz...), naked lads.. ect, ect?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Writerof View Post
    Any advise on how to make you're Sketch book look snazzy and cool.. Not sure how really.. Should I add some more studies of the human anatomy, add monsters, more boobs (Hmz...), naked lads.. ect, ect?
    I lack profound advice in this area, my sketchbook being new itself, but there's a way to put a picture on (as you've no doubt seen from looking at the sketchbook forum) as your thumbnail when it shows up on a list. I'm sure there's a "how-to" somewhere detailing that, or you could message someone to ask.

    You can also change your titles to specifiy what updates have been added and when; I've seen this in a few sketchbooks, although it's not really needed if you're updating fairly often.

    When your sketchbook gets to be many pages, the first post is usually edited to tell readers to skip to the last page for new things. Also, in a few I've seen eye-catching drawings that include the title of the sketchbook predomiantly displayed.

    Some color works would probably be captivating, although in the end I think everyone has their own style for making their sketchbook snazzy and cool, it's a matter of playing aound until you decide that you like it.

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    Here's a small update once again ...

    Thanx for all the support It kept me going

    And.. I'll figure it out thanx taven
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    A few more
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    Not really an update but, A PLAN

    To further my drawing disasters, I will pledge to, redo heads, reconsidering the way I draw heads.
    Further define the way I perceive bodies, thus making sure that, looking at my biggest Idol, Leonardo Da Vinci, that they actually look human.
    Try to shade and draw more, taking more time for them and not doodling for 5 minutes.

    So that is said

    Now.. Onward
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    The Update.... A few faces
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