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    sketchbook

    decided to register on the site after a year or so of just lookin around heres a few sketches to start.. i'll have more stuff up soon. hope i did everything right i dont post much on forums
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    I have to say, I really like the shadowing on the face of the lady. It's a captivating sketch, and I would certainly be interested in seeing how it progresses-- Do you plan to keep it as a sketch, or make a full peice out of it?

    The man with the bag's neck is too long, in my opinion, and his crotch-area needs more bulk. Good job on the hands, as well as giving a depth to it-- Something I comment on because my attempts at people always seem to end up looking flat.

    Look forewards to seeing more,

    --Taven

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    i agree with taven, that girl is amazing! it immediatly draws you in as a viewer.
    keep at it!
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    Entonces, bienvenido oficialmente a CA!

    a mi también me gustó el sombreado de la cara de la chica , pero tengo algunas cosas que decir...
    1. las armaduras yo las haría como más imponentes, más gruesas, porque por lo que se ve son muy planas y se ven solamente como líneas sobre el cuerpo.
    y segundo.. el último de la derecha tiene el cuello muy largo .. mejor.. chequea las proporciones porque se ve que en ambos personajes hay proporciones distintas (uno tiene el cuello más largo, piernas, brazos etc)

    anyways Is a good star for a sb!
    have fun and learn very much in here

    cheers!


    ps. I hope you speak spanish,,,

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    se me olvidó decir que las manos y la cara están muy bien realizadas

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    i agree with everyone else about the girl, i also like the style of the solider/secret agent keep it up!

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    Thanks for the comments and critiques! I'm planning on doing something with the girl when i fix my wacom, my lovely dog chewed the cord in half

    Sorry Clodioz i dont speak spanish i didnt think about that when i made the name up i just heard it in No Country for Old Men yesterday and thought it was cool. I'd like to know what you thought though if you dont mind retyping it! Heres some more old stuff i found.. i stopped after an hour on the girl (the eye looks weird i know) and the dwarf i was just messing around with coloring its actually just a template for a model i plan on doing one of these days

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    Heres a new one. i know the values are kinda throwed off i was wondering if anyone could give me some advice on that? i guess i should have done a black and white sketch first? any advice would be great!

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    oops forgot the picture

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    It's not showing up for me. Double-check you attached it right?
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    Been a few days since i've posted anything. Trying to learn the basics from some Andrew Loomis books and didnt want to post from that so heres something i got side tracked on

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    Interesting start! I particulary like the black and white portrait as it has a lovely atmosphere and feeling surrounding it. Have you done anymore like that one?

    Take Care,

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    great work man. your pencils remind me of Richard Corben a bit. You some promising details going on there.

    Cheers man

    Mario

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    been a while since i posted anything but i think i'm going to start again.. heres part of a logo i did for some friends for their music group.. the final one is cleaned up and has a title but this is the only one i could find on my comp

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    THose band members are pretty funny
    I like the last drawings, really nicely done (aint that the killer from No Country for Old Men?)
    I wanne see some more stuff!

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    cant seem to get my ps files to go smaller when i save.. converted them to jpegs and they are still too big to post.. anyone know what i'm doing wrong? they are all about the size of this one here or smaller, dont know why this one saved right any help would be nice.. thanks for all your comments guys

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