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February 16th, 2009 #106
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March 23rd, 2009 #108
March 23rd, 2009 #109
March 24th, 2009 #110
March 25th, 2009 #111
May 10th, 2009 #112
May 10th, 2009 #113
Long time, no post! (Well, in reguards to me posting in your sketchbook, anyways). I'm really liking what I'm seeing! I like how the sea horse in post 100 is different from your normal style of things, I think it turned out well and that it's good to branch out and exparament. One thing I think could be better about it is the background, and some of it's fins that aren't towards the viewer; they seem to be in a different style.
I'm absolutely amazed that you did the painting in post 101 in only ten minutes; you're really getting the hang of the tools, it seems like! In the 102 picture, I think the butterflies should have been done differently... Maybe brighter colors, to emphasise them better? My initial thought was that the ones in th sky were birds, I had to stop a second and wonder at their odd shape. They're too big for the distance they seem to be at, they should be smaller. That being said, I think your clouds turned out really, really well. They're very convincing!
Skipping ahead a bit, I think your bird in 106 is (dare I use this word? ) adorable. I love how you did it's face and feathers, though I think the wings should fold against it a bit differently, and have the feathers shaded a little more (while hopefully still keeping the style that I love about it!). I would say that while I think as a piece it's something I love, I think as a concept it's lacking. Here's why. From the picture, you can't tell how big it is, to me it looks more chicken-sized then something rideable. For a concept, I'd say that you'd want to stick a person in there for size comparison, show it from a few different views, and exparament with gear more-- With coloring as a secondary priority. I'd actually love to see more on it, because while lacking as a concept, I -love- how it turned out as a piece.
I'm getting lazy, but I'd like to say I like the style/texture on the picture in post 111, and that the warrior in 108 seems very cool, although not your usual topic matter-- You tend to post mostly enviroments. I'd love to see more of the warriors, though. Landscapes at a glance are good, some elements of them are photo-realistic while others say "digital painting" both of which are fine, depending on what you're going for.
I will try to come and critique more, when you stick more things up! I'd love if you could drop by my sketchbook, too. I'm trying some feeble attempts at digital art, with the limited tools avaliable to me, and I'd love advice from you on how to advance, what tools/techniques you recommend, etc.
--TavenConstructive Criticism welcomed at My Sketchbook!
May 11th, 2009 #114
May 14th, 2009 #115
May 16th, 2009 #116
That's really cool. I have absolutely no helpful comments about it, but it's really fun to look at. So many pretty shapes! @_@
More, please!Constructive Criticism welcomed at My Sketchbook!
May 24th, 2009 #117
July 23rd, 2009 #118
well i wish my pen pressure would have loaded seince this wasnt done with pen pressure ... will be good to expierment when i can get it to load correctly.
[img width=800 height=800]http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/7995/treeexpiermentday1copy.jpg[/img]
July 24th, 2009 #119
So this was something i was working on back before the mother board crash. Thought i was going to loose it but seince it was only a motherboard crash and not a complete destruction i was able to finish it thank god. Check it out on my deviant art looks much better there ... larger.
July 24th, 2009 #120
It's a strange color selection, but it works well. And it's a nice contrast between the more traditional, raw feeling of the land area versus the much smoother look of under the water. It's a really nice piece.If you have the time, please stop by my sketchbook, Chock Full o'Nuts.
I would appreciate any advice or critiques.
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