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    planetary defense

    hey this is sparth inspired

    using a mouse! can't wait till i get a tablet!

    still gotta do the ground...

    this is planetary defense i guess...

    C&C, brutal plz

    -Strang


    hope this posts right

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    I'm not a good painter by any means, so take my critique with a grain of salt. You need more values in your piece. If it's inspired by sparth, examine his pieces a bit more. His art is very painterly, loose strokes, etc. Do the same, but place the strokes so that they make sense.

    Also, the background and foreground are very empty. Place some cliffs or drop offs in the back and maybe some more larger boulders in the foreground.

    I can also see that the lighting from the inside is a bit off, work on the glow of the light a bit more.

    So basically, in a nutshell, add more value, some more environmental elements, and fix the lighting. Hope this helped in some way. Keep up the good work

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    Nice colours and idea, but bad painting... well, when you get your tablet it will be better

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