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January 12th, 2008 #1
Jim and the Pepper Puffs
UPDATE Jan 28
Added Mock up of Book Cover and detail shots.
Edit: Added photos of some prototype plushes of "Winky".
He's got a magnet in his hand and a magnet in his pepper so he can hold it. These toys aren't for children, they're for a local shop here in Ohio, who wants to sell some of my plush toys.
Okay so I have decided to write a children's book, although I've always tried to avoid it before because of the "women only ever do children's stories" stigma. I've stopped caring and started writing...
Here's a little snippet from the story so far.
A long time ago, when humans and animals were friends, there was a little old farm. On this farm lived a kindly old man named Jim. Jim had a big garden on his farm where he grew all sorts of fruits and vegetables...
...but the most important fruit that Jim grew on his farm was the spicy pepper.
...Why is the spicy pepper the most important fruit? Because it attracts Jim's favorite animal to his farm! His special helpers, the Pepper Puffs!
The Pepper Puffs are very small, the size of a bunny rabbit, they have great big ears just like a rabbit too! Instead of hopping around, which they sometimes do, they use their little bat wings to flit around from plant to plant, gathering up all the tasty fruits and vegetables in Jim's garden.
The old man is based off, both, of my husband's grandfather that recently passed away and is named after him, and my grandfather. The book will be dedicated to them as well as 2 other people.
The little pixel icons I whipped up for fun... The blue one is Winky, He's the leader of the pepper puffs, the "yellow"/cream one is Boston *Cream Pies* he's a bit chunky, he's the resident taste tester he helps out Salsa the Chef *the red one* in the kitchen. The orange one is Tower, he's the tallest of the bunch and the resident know it all, he gives bad advice though he means well, The purple one is Sprinkle and the Green one is Wispy, they're the smallest of all the pepper puffs, not because of age, but they just developed that way, Wispy has very small wings so he has to flap them twice as much to keep up with the other pepper puffs, and Sprinkle is the resident girly girl, she's not so much prissy but more like a mother figure to the other puffs, she loves to be mothering everyone even if it can be rather ~smothering~ to the other Puffs.
The House, in the vector image, is a puffball mushroom, the door is a piece of pumpkin shell, the doorknob is a button, and the window is half of someone's old glasses. All of the Pepper Puffs live in a house like this.
Last edited by Fuish; January 28th, 2008 at 04:35 AM.
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January 13th, 2008 #3
What's Worms Armageddon? Hook me up w/ a link?
And I'm glad you think it's "ceeeeee-uuute"
January 16th, 2008 #4
January 16th, 2008 #5
I think the colors of the moon and the house are too similar. The crazy rendering is distracting to me, the only thing my eye really can rest on... is on the fruitbasket. It's not adding depth.
Colorwise, there's a lot of yellow going, but nothing that unifies the piece. You have style vs lightning problems here, and you kinda need to make a choice.
Also, as an environment, i'm wishing you added more than just the tiled path, adding some bushes around the house tells more about where they are. It now seems a bit too deserted/isolated. I'm also not sure what that thing on the left of the door is.
I like how you explain how they foraged the elements of their home, but i'm just wishing it showed that a bit better. Conceptwise it sounds really cute.
January 28th, 2008 #6
January 28th, 2008 #7
Painting I just finished, has some pepper puffs in it so I thought I'd put it in here. I'm trying to work on a few pieces that could go in a gallery/expand my range of styles. Hope you like it. Crits are welcome as always.
February 1st, 2008 #8