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    Veil of Mist

    I know there are some elements I can add or take out so I'm ready for your suggestions.

    This is also my first environment piece.
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    kindof spooky to me.
    The moon ini the bg is looking too simple to me. Perhaps adding some craters or subtle shading may help there. Also think about compositiion and where you want to draw the viewer's attention to.
    Is it the road? The forest? The path?

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    I wanted the overall effect to be ominous with the fog sweeping across the forest floor.

    I kept the trees spread apart to have a slightly inviting feeling while also making someone think twice about continuing down the path.

    I also didn't know if it required any creatures in the piece to add an eerie presence.

    Having said that, I think I'd want to focus on the path since its right in the middle of the picture as if the viewer was walking on it.
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    It is a good start and with few touches it could be very good work. There is depth, good light and shadows. But you could give some more textures on the first- plan tree
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