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    Ex Nihilo: Crits?

    Having some issues with this one.
    First is when I stopped, thinking I was happy with it, and second is after chaosrocks gave me a good ol fashioned hard hitting crit.
    What do you guys think I can/should change?

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    The guy is looking at me but the gun is pointing down. So I'm guessing, he is my friend or a sidekick or at least he trust me on some level?

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    It's a nice pic. I dig the tattoo.

    Anyway, on to critique. The first thing i notice is that his torso and pelvis doesn't connect properly. Right now his torso is almost at a perfect 180&#186; angle towards the viewer, whereas is pelvis seems to be angled 90&#186; away from the viewer (i hope this makes sense).

    There's also reading issues in the pelvis area. If i disregard the notion of a backpocket it's hard to distinguish whether the crotch or behind is front.


    His legs also seems a bit stiff to me.

    I made a quick paint over, it's not perfect but I hope it show what I mean.


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