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    looking for tips/ suggestions on my illustration (wip)

    Well here it is so far. I think im just about ready to move on to doing some detailing so i was wondering from you guys if there are any major issues/ concerns i should address before moving on? thanks in advance

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    I dont see many issues. Are you focusing more on the ship(?) or the couple? Maybe that should be made more clear. Or the landscape ? I dont see any issues really. Details details!!

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    Beautiful pic. The airship is incredible.

    My only gripe is that I wish you'd show all of the ship, even some empty space around it, because it appears to be a major element in the piece.

    Excellent composition and mood in this one too. Great job!!

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    Nice image and composition! good work!
    Maybe itīs me, but I although I like it, I find the composition a bit too horizontal, with two mayor focal points, the airship and the couple on both sides of the canvas, letting the center way out of the composition with just the city in the horizon.
    I would give more power to the couple, because at the end they are the leading characters of the canvas, making them bigger, and also distort a little the airship (so you canīt tell where it has the end).
    I would try to make the canvas shorter and higher, getting both focal points into each other and develop one focal point near the viewers (the couple) and the other at the background (the airship).
    Iīve made a quick paint over to express myself better. Hope you donīt mind.

    Cheers

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