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    Jiang.YiFan's SketchBook

    Hey,everybody I'm new here.` ^_^
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    hey man welcome to CA!
    these are looking pretty solid for your start
    keep updating man!

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    hey this is a nice start you have here. The life studies are looking fantastic, however you may want to avoid trying to force out an anime style on some of these pieces. The anatomy, on the faces especially, is fairly off (most noteably the positioning of the jaw and chin in relation to the rest of the face). The best suggestion I can give is just to stick more to life studies for now, and make sure to apply what you learn from life over to when you draw in an anime style.

    this may be pointless though since these are older pieces, you may have already fixed these problems in that style so start posting some newer stuff and just keep drawing. All the first post is looking awesome :] you just gotta bring that over to the anime style too if thats what you want to be drawing like.

    hope this helps, and if you don't understand any of it feel free to ask, i saw your signature that says your english is poor :] hope its all clear

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    Thank the suggestion of Soul Karl! ! ! I will go to try it . Tried another kind of style today, felt very difficult.

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    hey Jiang,thanks for your comment.
    Here is my suggestions (only suggestions)
    don't draw anime right now
    draw from life as much as you can
    Need your critique
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    very nice life studies. nice to see you draw something out of you comfort zone, what a good start.

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    You are quickly becoming a very fine artist. I like what I see. Keep up the good work.
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    Shut up and draw.

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    Hey Jiang!
    Thanks for the comment on my sketchbook
    Some great stuff you got here.
    Remember to have a solid foundation in the realistic figure, then you can make styles like anime look amazing!

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    nice manga dude. keep posting!

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    Love the portraits and the jacket!

    keep'em coming and i will keep on lookin

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    bridgemannnnnnnn......
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    So i've been meaning to do this for a bit and I finally got around to it. It seems that when you're drawing from memory in the 3/4 view (or maybe its just when drawing anime in general) you're letting the chin fall in and the faces look distorted. I did this draw over for you on one example of the problem to hopefully help you see.

    Attachment 263821

    I think I fall into this same problem a lot when I just draw the head like it was a circle. Bridgeman covers this in some of his books, but try putting a box around the head when you're constructing it - it fits better into this shape. You want to keep the chin protruding more than it is, it really just takes practice and knowing what to look for.

    hope this helps dude :] keep up the bridgeman studies they're looking good

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