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December 13th, 2007 #1
New post...dead girl, check; green man, check; angel, check
this last couple of months' work. hope you like. crit hard (heheh...hard...)
all of em are acrylic on canvas.
p.s. please excuse the sucky pictures
This is Where I am Now.
This is Where I was 2 years ago
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Good start! You need to look at your anatomy a bit more however.
The guy's head is too small width wise, his face is large but the area to store his brain is very tight fit. His jaw and face needs to be brought out more to give the back of his head some room.
Now, the woman laying down has some issues with her shoulder/neck/head. Oh, and she doesn't really read as "dead"...she looks more spaced out then anything.
Her eyes are too small, her face looks very flat/shallow for the angle you have her at.
The whole area where her arms (they are too skinny) meet her shoulders looks very off. Where her jaw meets her neck is too harsh and shouldn't be black, no lines are her face should be black. She has no area from her shoulders to her breasts, and her breasts look like they are very hard...
I have attached some examples of what I am talking about...hope it helps!
Last edited by digital_zombie; June 27th, 2009 at 10:24 AM.