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    Sofija's temptation

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    i dont get the meaning of the title... where is temptation?
    was the wall done by hand?
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    Quote Originally Posted by digital seeker View Post
    i dont get the meaning of the title... where is temptation?
    Maybe she wants to have sex with the alien?

    It's kind of good but I would get more into the mood of the piece.

    It feels too cut off and the center of the image is just boring writing on a boring wall.

    I would suggest getting some reference of lighting and making it more dramatic (after filling the void in the center some - blood, guts, skulls, stained glass window, alien hive goop - something that helps frame and accentuate the writing).

    Make sure to extend the image some because you can't just abruptly cut off the alien like that - it makes it look more flat and cheap.
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    Thanx for comments, people, I appreciate it !

    To digital seeker; Yes, the title really has no meaning, but I haven’t paid much attention to it, (and I should)..., and the wall was imported, (I found this texture somewhere, it is probably generated by some Photoshop plug-in.) and I painted over it.
    I agree, the wall is flat and different from the rest of the picture, it should be painted too.

    AshenWraith you’re right.
    It needs that dramatic lighting and something solid in the center (my English is not very good so I have to ask you; what is alien hive goop?).to frame the writing.
    Like this, image has no mood at all.
    I’ll try and find the time to correct it, and post it again..

    Thanx again!!!

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