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    Behemoth b/w

    Drawn with HB, 2B pencils, the blacks are done with a Pentel ink brush, and the outlines are with a Pilot Hi-tec C 0.25 pen (very thin =] )

    Any critiqute and comments welcome

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    Do you mind telling us what makes them a Behemoth?
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    Quote Originally Posted by qabas12 View Post
    Do you mind telling us what makes them a Behemoth?
    They are a Polish Black Metal Band:

    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Behemoth_(band)

    Crit on drawing:

    Watch your proportions on the first figure, the torso looks small compared to his head, arms, and hands which give him a dwarfish appearance. The torso's perspective looks a bit amorphous. Good work on the slightly upraised head of the figure on the right. It can be tricky to draw and you got it right. Nice textures and values in your pens.
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    Thank you Al,

    I'm going to try and fix that

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    today its blackened death metal, yeah yeah very accurate
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    Polished metal?
    At least Icarus tried!


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    Nice, I immediately recognized them. I do agree with the above critiques. And I must also add that I think using a type of measuring system would help with your slightly uneven shapes.

    Anyway, though I mainly posted to say hey to a fellow Behemoth fan (Or, at least I assume you like them). I got to see them live at Ozzfest this year, they were awesome.
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    Is this better?

    Nice ERIK, those are my bros, was with them for 4 days last week...hopefully if everything works out, youll see this design on their next tours merch

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