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    Good luck with the lawsuits.

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    Wouw very nice!
    Just one little thing I noticed is the right foot of the middle guy. Its turned to much to the inside.
    When you look at the woman on the right you see that that left foot is twisted even more to the outside and the right foot stands to the front. With the middle guy his right foot isn't fully turned to the side and his left foot is turned a bit to the inside, it should be turned a little bit to the outside too.

    Still a very nice drawing!
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    I like the colors and am digging the composition!

    A few things I noticed:

    The figures are well done however it looks as though his cape is pushing her over.

    The K in book looks like a D in both places.

    The figures look like they are floating b/c of the white outline at the feet and their clothing is darker then the shadows by a ton so it they dont' look grounded.

    The perspective is confusing b/c the ground plane is angled, the buildings to the left are angled, yet the ones on the right are straight up/down...?

    I think the text should be on top, not have stuff floating over it...it's distracting.

    The lines of fog going over the center characters legs and the fog swish under the female seem too obvious and my eye goes to them b/c they are almost lines, not really a focal point, so I think that needs tweaking.

    Just my 1st observations.

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    nate - thanks for commenting! but what ever do you mean?! the characters were designed by the company and it is a homage RPG so please explain!

    max- i see what you mean by the feet being a bit tweaked! thanks!!!

    Miss Logic -thanks great points the feel I was going for was a pulp comic in distress ....logically...no pun in tended..the text would be in distress as well! Great comments all!!!

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    I understand "distressed type" however your's isn't distressed, there are a couple pieces of-who-knows-what floating over top of it, you should actually alter the type for distress. the floaties don't cut it

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    Maybe the RPG company has it all sorted out, but it all looks suspiciously like....

    And I didn't even notice the Disney's Lion King and Prudential Insurance logos in the background.

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    I'm certain they do they have been producing these games and characters for some time! your right the center figure is a Dr. Strange type the one to his left is a constantein type and the girl is a raven type character! hence the term Homage rpg it is their character designs not mine! here is a link to the game M&M website in the shop you can see the different super hero rpg's they have produced...Hero High ,Agents of Freedom, Ultimate Power...the list goes on1

    http://mutantsandmasterminds.com/

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