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November 20th, 2007 #1
My previous sb turned 1 y/o just over a week ago, and now stands at 22 pages. Which is my lucky number. I also just finished up my second year at college, so I took all this as incentive to start a new book on here and leave beautiful liar behind. Because new years comes sooner for me.
I don't feel like bumping my old sb, so I'll just very improperly thank everyone for posting and critting my work on there, it means a great deal to wake up some mornings and find that you peeps were interested enough to give well considered, well founded feedback. Muchos gracias.
Right so I'm pretty darn excited about this coming year, have a lot ideas bouncing around, a lot of pet projects, and best of all some time (college 3rd year gives you a lot of freedom, so I may well end up pursuing some of my own goals). Looking forward to doing some fun stuff.
Anycase, I'm rambling again. First art of this sb follows in my next post, this one is reserved for the almighty thumb.
- Brendan Noeth
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So this was a pretty interesting project, it involved designing and illustrating your own ID book (the title is a play on this concept of this sb becoming an ID document and the Freudian term for the subconscious). Luckily my lecturer gave me quite a bit of liberty and increased creative direction, so I was able to ditch some parts of the brief and add extra stuff. these 9 spreads are the final result:
feedback welcome as always
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November 20th, 2007 #3
November 20th, 2007 #4
Something a little newer - a WIP for an upcoming exhibition of mine. Crits would be appreciated on this one, something feels really really off:
And, just a trivial little piece - the menu screen designed for me interactive portfolio:
think that's all for now. c&c would be greatly appreciated. rip this shit apart.
November 20th, 2007 #5
Didn't see your previous sketchbook, but I liked the style and the design of your project pages at the top so much, I'll have to check out your older stuff. I think you've nailed the theme, loose linework and textures really fit the subject. Good luck with your studies man, keep it up
November 21st, 2007 #6
IvkeBG - As the first person to post in my new sb, you have been bestowed with a most sacred honour: the first reply of my new sb! many thanks for dropping by, appreciate the kind comments .
Just thought I might throw in my sp for the awesome International SP day.
c&c welcome as always.
November 21st, 2007 #7
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I really like the first ones
November 22nd, 2007 #9
bhanu - thank you bruthar, more coming up.
catti - many thanks, I think you may be one of the few who do .
just a tiny little late last night speedy:
this one was done with a new brush set I put together for myself, instead of the usual barontieri/min mix.
this is the first time I've used em, hope to take them further and evolve them.
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November 22nd, 2007 #10
Those textures are so great, gotta love them
As for your problem in post 4, I can't really see what's wrong either. When I squint, I can tell it's compositional.
I would only suggest moving the woman closer to the circle, and having her hair cross it. I find myself very unsatisfied with the 'touching' between the hair and the circle there; it irks me. See if that makes any difference.
November 22nd, 2007 #11
November 30th, 2007 #12
drd - many thanks. The composition there is still very much flawed, and yes the hair is really uncomfortable at this stage - that'll be softened out in the near future. Many thanks for dropping by!
Skeiff - Thanks Mitch, always cool hearing kind words from you. Thanks for dropping by, remind me to pay you a visit.
Just a quick speedie-bump here - I don't think this one is more than 30 minutes. Real art soon!
c&c always appreciated!
November 30th, 2007 #13Registered User
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great start to your new sketchbook. the speedpaints are really strong. on the wip for the exebition i think the problem is that the position of the figure is pulling the eye off the page which is competing with the graphic shape of the hair and the circle on the right side. i dont know what is supposed to be going on but i would think about flipping the figure and have her looking to the right side of the image, also, maybe change the position of one of the arms to also help lead the eye through the image, not off it.
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November 30th, 2007 #14fishing for boots...
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Great start man, this killer style you got going on here hoss!
Check your PM
December 1st, 2007 #15
Good stuff you've got here. i love the texture that you're getting on some of your stuff. It's totally excellent work you have here.
BTW, which part of South Africa are you from? I was born in Pretoria; lived there for 14 years then moved to the US in '99.
Anyways, it's good to see other South Africans on here.
December 1st, 2007 #16
I'm likin' your work
In post #4, maybe her upper arms are a little too short (and consequently, her lower arms too long to compensate)? Just a thought...
Keep up the cool artz! Cheers
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December 1st, 2007 #17
i'm officially in love with you and your work
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December 13th, 2007 #18
themissinglink: Many thanks. The figure looking off the page is definitely part of the concept - I'm not worried about the composition on there so much, I've got it all figured out to resolve anything uncomfortable. The figure is bugging my though, I'll have to get to work on her again. Big thanks for dropping by!
Coinpurse: Thanks bro! Got the pm, you get mine? Managing the thing? You got some killer new stuff in your sb btw, keep swinging it!
Peetear: Thanks! I'm also from Pretoria, though I hope to get out of here asap. Thanks for dropping by, definitely cool to see more South Africans!
AmontilladoAg: Much appreciated. Think you are right about her arms, there's definitely something wonky there. Will check it out. cheers for stopping in!
Ignominious: haha thanks!
Felt bad for not updating - lots of cool stuff happening which I cannot or should not divulge just yet. So, not to make this post a complete bump, here are some colour sketches I did a while back. No more than 30 min on each of there, most of them are probably around 15-20 min. crits always appreciated!
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December 13th, 2007 #19
That change in mood with your last post was quite jarring! It's all good though, love your use of colour and texture in everything you've done here. The animation stills look fantastic.
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December 15th, 2007 #22
Hey Brendan, didn't know you had a new SB. My first impression is soaking in your great sense of color. Every tone and mix hits a nice chord.
You're becoming a king of these speedies. As previously stated, lighting & the textures make the images sing. The SP has a nice watercolory feel. Warm, perhaps some hints of blues, turquoise influence as planes change. But non-the-less.....nicely done!
Only crit to add to the girl image with moon, is that her torso lacks a little definition. Seems a bit bulgy. I would also venture to say, that if her hair is stylized, perhaps her skirt would echo that more graphic feel as well, leaving only her figure organic as a contrast.
P.S. Thanks for your regular visits to my lackluster SB. I enjoy reading your comments, always well thought out and kind. Your books have so much creative and very personal approaches to content. Am jealous.
I know this SB will be teeming with wondrous stuff.
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December 15th, 2007 #23
omg dude i had no idea u started a new sb, should have dropped me a note man
you're going crazy awesome stylistically, i cant wait to see what other insane stuff you're capable of in the future
do you use msn or anything? would be cool to have a chat sometime!
December 18th, 2007 #24
thek - haha, was thinking the same thing as I was posting em, kinda ruins what little feel this book has. here's to more ruining! thanks for dropping by, glad you like the anim stills!
bhanu: Many thanks, assimus pattus appreciate the drop-in bro!
Aztec! lackluster?! LACKLUSTER?!! LACK!! LUSTER!!? For once I don't entirely agree with your post haha . Your book is anything but lackluster, ma'am. Big thanks for the crit on the girl in post 4, it's the crit I've been waiting for. I'll get to fixing asap. Many thanks for your droppings-by, I always appreciate and enjoy reading your comments immensely.
paperX: Thanks dood, cool to see you around! Appreciate the kind words. I do have msn, but rarely get on, Internet is not so friendly to south africans anymore . Throw me a pm though and I'll add you on!
another speedbump: went through a windmill fad one morning, no more than about 40 min on each (ref'd of course):
c+c always welcome!
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December 18th, 2007 #25Registered User
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December 18th, 2007 #26
nice digis dude, im really loving the sketchbook pages right up top as well, nice textures and use of traditional medium.
December 18th, 2007 #27
eclectic...but all you showed here was pleasant to see...
good sense of colors...
keep it up
December 18th, 2007 #28
Really, REALLY interesting stuff you got here. You get me curious for more!
Beware, it's a crappy Sketchbook.
"We are all heroes! You and me and Boo..."
December 18th, 2007 #29
Your sense of colour amazes me! I'm a bit envious, to be honest Your pictures have impressive atmospheres and mood, mostly because of your well thought-out colour palette. Your line strokes are very confident as well, it's like organized chaos, because it looks very sketchy but still appears to be calculated.
Perhaps enough asspat for one post? Most likely, but I'm still saying that I look forward to see more of your work!
December 19th, 2007 #30
damn man gemini ftw ! you just knocking them our of the park wiht this one man !great stuff !!!!!