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    Arrow Once Upon a Time there was a Tiny Mouse

    Piece based on the poem with the same name by Kurt Schwitters.
    Let me know what you think, this is a fairly new way of working for me but I'm quite pleased!

    Check out the progress thread here:
    http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...d.php?t=110540
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    I am liking the top half (though I can't say I really care for the cut/pasted photo in the bg) and the word "Mouse" needs to be moved over, I understand that it's got the swirl going on but it looks odd being so far from the rest of the text (maybe that's just me)

    Then I scroll down a bit and it's just overwhelmed in the bottom left...the eye is drawn to that area w/ illegible text, and a hand coming out of no where....What's going on? It looks like it's holding the figure up and it makes no sense.

    If you do an illustration w/text, you should make it readable without having to strain to figure it out.

    It has potential though, so good job but it needs a few tweaks.
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    I like that but the picture in the frame is too much, and i agree about the unreadable text in the bottom
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