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November 20th, 2007 #1
Once Upon a Time there was a Tiny Mouse
Piece based on the poem with the same name by Kurt Schwitters.
Let me know what you think, this is a fairly new way of working for me but I'm quite pleased!
Check out the progress thread here:
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I am liking the top half (though I can't say I really care for the cut/pasted photo in the bg) and the word "Mouse" needs to be moved over, I understand that it's got the swirl going on but it looks odd being so far from the rest of the text (maybe that's just me)
Then I scroll down a bit and it's just overwhelmed in the bottom left...the eye is drawn to that area w/ illegible text, and a hand coming out of no where....What's going on? It looks like it's holding the figure up and it makes no sense.
If you do an illustration w/text, you should make it readable without having to strain to figure it out.
It has potential though, so good job but it needs a few tweaks.
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November 21st, 2007 #3
I like that but the picture in the frame is too much, and i agree about the unreadable text in the bottom