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    please come n giv some comments..

    hi, i am naaaq frm malaysia ...
    well, i am a art n design student..
    so happy that i found a forum that are so cool..
    i would like to see whether my works can have a little supports from friends out there..
    feel free to give critics k
    by the way, my english is quite limited with a lot of grammar mistake..
    please forgive ya..
    peacedude

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    trying to do expressionism...


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    Looking very nice.

    If you want crits on design, you need to post something from a production. These are like expressionist illustrations. Since there's no purpose, there's no way to give it a rational crit. They just, look nice...

    - Current project <- Crit away!
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    If these are studies for packaging designs then I think you should incorporate the font into your work... like Whattt Thrash stated, what is the purpose of these images... none the less they are very nice...

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    juz tryin out sum new creation..
    didn't think so much...
    but the caracter design is for a exhibition in taiwan...
    here are sumore..



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    I like your design sense. Maybe a little too sketchy on some of the linework. Maybe you need to crystallize your linework. Make your lines more bold at times to contrast with the thinner lines.

    Keep up the good work.

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    yo,
    thanks for those advice..
    here are sumthing new...


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