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    Dreamed World. In progress.

    Hi there!

    I'm a new comer. And i came here to learn more. So i hope that you'll help me to go on with your critics.

    This is my truly first work in the Concept Art. Totally done with : a 800 dpi mouse, Photoshop Cs3 and my heart.

    I'll post 2 other steps before i can say: that's the job!

    So i'll watch my mouth and let you see...

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    Right now, you've got a lot of elements in your piece but with no sense of composition. Nothing is leading my eye around the image but rather it's bouncing all over the place. There's also no atmospheric perspective to give a sense of depth to the background.

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    thanx for your smart critic. You say it and i see it!.

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