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    potential cover

    I need some help. Please tell me your opinions on this piece. It is a potential cover and I really need to know if it is up to snuff as an eye catching magnet.

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    I like it. There is just something disturbing me a bit with the guy on the left with the purple jacket. I find his posture very strange. It looks like something is missing in his left hand, I don't find him "natural". Maybe giving him a shotgun ?

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    Looks good. My main complain may be that the sword guy and the guy with the purple jacket expresions are "wtf, I could be at home taking a beer" instead of being focused or expresing tension.

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    same as Auhsan.. like it though.

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    drawing is great, buildings are excellent. but i really don't think the blurry coloring is doing you justice. also, not that I do comic art, but one of my teachers said never use white outlines, that you ought to change those surrounding values or reconsider what you're drawing (ie redraw it).

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